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Alexa, it seems like our definitions of \"bad\" differ quite a bit. To me, what Harry did was pretty bad - using sex to humiliate someone, to me that\'s more personal than just beating them up. (Especially in the wizarding world, where it\'s pretty impossible to hurt someone so bad they can\'t be healed instantly, or at least overnight, with a spell or potion.) Ah, well - glad you liked it anyway.

It is very very painful. I would like to catch Harry, slap his face, yell on him long time and make him to go to Draco and really comfort him. I would like to catch that bastard who gives the potion to Draco and kill him really slowly (maybe to cut his heart out using only spoon).
Please update soon!

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From chapter three onward, there were already spaces between the paragraphs, but I went back and added them for chapter one and two, too.

You said you were accepting criticism, so here goes. The story is great, fabulous, don\'t change a thing. Can you possibly put spaces between the paragraphs? My eyesight is not great, and it is really wearing to try to read with it all smushed together like that. Thanks.

Huh. This wasn\'t at all as bad as I feared/expected. I thought he\'d beat him up while Draco was pleading, etc. Oh, well. I liked Harry\'s power trip. Will there be a rendition of this from Draco\'s point of view?

Please update soon.

great story, please update soon. is harry going to hurt him more, i mean not punching but bdsm cause this is a hot n interesting story. like how harry\'s anger builds n how he takes it out on malfoy. most story\'s dont show that part. keep it up, terrific hd story

NOOO! You can\'t end it there!! The suspense is killing me! Who did this to my poor Draco?

Merlin, it was awesome! Dark and full of concern, perfect describing of Harry\'s confusing and suppressed emotions, his worry and feeling of helplessness. I so afraid that he is going hurt Draco for something Lucius had done! On one hand, it\'s understandable, because Draco is a closest thing to Lucius, Harry can reach and can hurt, but on other hand, Draco being used by someone to get to Lucius already, and he is used by Harry too, and now if Harry will hurt him (and he had promised he will nor hurt him!) it would so unfair to Draco! It\'s horrible. I look forward to next chapter and just hope, Harry wouldn\'t hurt Draco.
He, he must already get his head clear and do something useful, like busy himself with learning as much spells as he can, and get Hermione to blurt out secret of her research, and find out why Remus\'s letters are so strange. I surprised that Harry doesn\'t do anything except worrying. He is Gryffindor, they must be act, not worry. %)
But I so afraid for Draco now...

Ow. I\'m trembling for Draco\'s safety now. My heart is bleeding for him.

I like your story very much.