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for Seduction of Darkness

by PoisonedInk

person leprechaun
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! i love your writing!!!! you have so many good ideas!!! anyways, i have noticed a few grammar mistakes here and there and if you need a beta, i'd be happy to beta for you. keep up the good work!! ^_^
person tessa3
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH SHIT...Harry, Voldemort and Dumbles in the Veela Kingdom...bad oh so very bad *shakes head*
person yoblossom
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O....... ooooo, I think sumn bad gonna happen! XD UPDATE! PLEASE!
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh... Things are going to go down! lol. Cant wait!!!
person The w00t Girl
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, cannot wait to see what happens between Dumbledore, Tom, and Harry once they see Dumbledore. Please update soon!
person Danni
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*drool* i am in love...
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, I realy like it so far. Chapter 2- as far as i've gotten. It might help if there was a little more explanation as to why Harry feels the way he does. Why does he think Dumbeldoor would send him to Azkaban for murder....He couldn't do that and he wouldn't! manipulation aside you cant send him to jail for murder when everyone around them was helping him do it. lol he'd have to send all of them to Azkaban with him. Otherwise its a good start...Now I have to read on.
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just starting Chapter eight and I must SAY I LOVE IT!!! I have to go to work otherwise i'd finish it now *contemplates faking sick to get out of work* TOO AWSOME!
person Ayue Edigoshi
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just finished! Was sooo good! Must update soon, althou Harry's forgival of him is still a little fast I don't much care.
person Ayue Edigoshi
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just finished! Was sooo good! Must update soon, althou Harry's forgival of him is still a little fast I don't much care.