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for Passing

by JDeppfan27

person Conacha
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful... very romantic!!!
person Anon
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would\'ve liked it if it was a little slower paced. The part in the great hall was very cheesy and just running off to have sex made no sense. A flashback of how they got together, then a present-time sex scene would\'ve made more sense. Overall, it wasn\'t very well written.
person Gryffindorgrl86
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. The ending was so sweet!!!! And i got a good laugh when snape walked in!!!
person Alexa
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute!
I loved the \"I love you so bad it hurts and I just want to rip my heart out and yell at it for betraying me like this\" line. So Draco, and one of the more original declarations of love I\'ve read so far.
Thanks for a nice read.
person Sarah
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really good Kenz!