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for Slick-smooth

by sioniann

person juneko-kurozawa
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice, very interesting and also very intense. I liked it



PS: "ti voglio bene" doesn't really mean "I love you" in a romantic sense, but much more in an affect(like between close friends or sieblings). Instead, an italian would say "ti amo" to the one he/she loves.
person Lori
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. That italian at the end means 'I love you', if I remmeber Nonna's teaching's correctly. Its great that it didn't show meaningless sex, but feeling behind it.
person Mistress Vamp
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad :)
person Joey
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oOo, very nice
love the imagery, the violincello is beautiful
gorgeous little piece... what does that mean at the end?
I [do something] to you well? You do something well? My knowledge of Italian is sadly lacking, for a student of Latin and Spanish.