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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well not much to go on, but enough to have me curious. I\'ll await more from you.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know how long you have known English, but I have to say that your way of describing things shows great linguistic creativity! With a beta and some revision, you will be well on your way to a good fic. Good luck, you are an inspiring author, writing in a non-native language!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Vampire Severus is very hot. I\'m waiting for more.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it\'s time to find another beta. Besides the typos, your verb tenses shift within the story. This makes it very difficult to read.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey u seem good so far but where\'s the rest yaaint gonna leave a fella waitin r ya? lol hoping for another chapter soon
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is good so far. Please update soon.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning.