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I like it! Can\'t wait to read more . :)

Aww! I absolutley loved that chapter! Sevvie is so sweet! lol

- Jessica

me again ^_^

i really like harrys inner slytherin... :sniggers: its quite... amusing... ah, what the hey. its absolutely hilarious. i mena, it subverts his body....

love the new chapter ^_^

Ohhh, this is soooo hot, please, please write more. I\'m all flustered. Will Severus say yes? What will Harry do if he doesn\'t? How will this nights detention go?


So many questions and all that hot action, ARGGGGHHHHHH!

Waiting, waiting, please, write more.

*claps wildly* Loved it!! Harry\'s inner voice almost sounds like Draco to me. LOL!! It\'s like he has an inner Malfoy that\'s bound and determined to get what he wants! =D I\'m so glad you decided to write this. From one writer to another, wouldn\'t you say that it\'s just plain old fun to play with other people\'s characters? I feel like I know you too, girl. It\'s amazing just how much an author puts of themselves into their stories, even if it\'s without conscious thought. =) Oh, I saw one thing in your story, too. Starting with \'Harry is so lost in trying\' you change to present tense to past, but otherwise, another excellent chapter. Bravo!! Can\'t wait for your next update!!!

oh wow that was great i cant wait to see Severus reaction in the next chapter!!!!!

First two chapters very good - I especially liked the section where Harry was trying to explain the dream to Snape without giving it away - the way it went from what Harry was saying to what Harry was thinking was excellent, it flowed very well.

Can\'t wait to read more, you\'re a natural storyteller :)

Much love,

Arian.
xoxo

A good start, I\'d love to see more...

Awwwww! You are so mean to leave it there! More!

Wow, Harry just blurted it out. Unbelievable.

cdk