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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I find it too many songs and too little story this time though I enjoy reading your fic even with little story.
But this time you barely had ten sentences around the songs. It was a little difficult to go through without knowing the songs and without them having anything to do with the main characters or the story around. I try not being impolite because, as I said before, I really like the idea and the story but my vocabulary is limited as I
But this time you barely had ten sentences around the songs. It was a little difficult to go through without knowing the songs and without them having anything to do with the main characters or the story around. I try not being impolite because, as I said before, I really like the idea and the story but my vocabulary is limited as I
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that chapter was cute. I cant wait to see some snarry action
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Severus lurking in the background....I wonder why Harry was pondering....Was it because he was thinking of Severus???? Can it be????? I do hope so!
You do a marvellous job of finding the right song to reflect what the characters are thinking, even if it\'s just for fun.
Great update, and after a little nap, please post more.
You do a marvellous job of finding the right song to reflect what the characters are thinking, even if it\'s just for fun.
Great update, and after a little nap, please post more.
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! It STOPED!!! WHY DID IT STOP?! I love DDR, really I do, even if I do foul up every time I play, it still rocks. You\'ve gott a great plot going here, please don\'t let it end!!! (not yet at least)
NEVER STOP WRITING
~ Aden Diction
Addiction
NEVER STOP WRITING
~ Aden Diction
Addiction
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great fic! I can\'t wait for the update!! I\'m a pretty big fan of Depech Mode, and I LOVE that song! It totally fit snape!
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes! Beautifully written.
You are welcome for the song, I can just hear Severus singing it, his voice permeating my body *shivers*...Oooo
Excellent chapter and now, the rest of the story is going to be so juicy, a Slytherin Seduction!!!!! I can\'t wait.
If giggling makes you write faster, then I send you a virtual enslavement to tickling.
You are welcome for the song, I can just hear Severus singing it, his voice permeating my body *shivers*...Oooo
Excellent chapter and now, the rest of the story is going to be so juicy, a Slytherin Seduction!!!!! I can\'t wait.
If giggling makes you write faster, then I send you a virtual enslavement to tickling.
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
look i think you have a great idea here for this story, but it is a little corny, im sure you have plenty of great ideas for this theme, but i mean how many stories are there out there where songs are playing and they have deep meanings to the characters around. ex boyfriends, unrequited love.. sigh how pathetic for them. im sure you are a great writer and i dont want you to think im critisising you its just this story is so full of cliches.
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Operation SNARRY.... heh... good good. length doesn\'t matter when the chapter is good. :) Glad to be of service!!!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
/First thing tomorrow....I start Operation, SNARRY!/
YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SNARRY!?!
Its wrong.
It\'s oddly wrong.
But at the same time, it\'s oddly...sexy.
GET-A-Typing.
*is one to talk*
YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SNARRY!?!
Its wrong.
It\'s oddly wrong.
But at the same time, it\'s oddly...sexy.
GET-A-Typing.
*is one to talk*
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is realy good! i hope theres more soon. i also think the songs you have used are realy appropriet.
i love it!
i love it!