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person Anon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!
person SLYTHERIN LOVER
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DONT MAKE IT A THREE WAY!!!!!! PLEASE!!!! JUST HARRY AND SEVERUS
person Anna
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story so you need to update soon!! Also, a really good song for Harry (well at least I think it is), is Going Under by Evanescence. Of course there are some others like Lies by Billy Talent and Line and Sinker by Billy Talent. But anyways, your story do what you want. Hope to see an update in the near future!
person huntresss
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes..... please make it a 3 way love with Draco and Snape... I adore those and there just aren't very many of them.
ITs perfect... update soon
person Mel
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good fic!! I liked the touch of My Chemical Romance's Helena but sorry to say i dont like the idea of a threeway. At the moment it is really Snape/Harry that i have stuck in my head. Continue how you will. I'll still read it.! LOL
person LadyRed
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story keep it up.. and yes "girls just wanna have fun" is by cyndi lauper
person SilverPhoenix
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok i really liked this, till you did the Harry Cutting thing...i still like it, dont get me wrong, but cutting just doesnt work like that...in the first 4 chapters, you didnt say anything about him cutting, so im gonna guess that Harry has never done it before. Just from what i read he didnt seem depressed(and even when your depressed, it doesnt mean that everyone cuts) enough to try to kill himself..you just dont go from trying to kill your self to dancing and singing like that...im not trying to say i now everything about cutting/trying to kill yourself but just from what you've writen, i dont think that would have happened...anyways now that ive done with that...i really love DDR lol, its a great game, i have it for PS2 and i played it a lot kill the pad broke *glares*...and for your AN, id day to do Harry/Draco/Severus but id be fine with Harry/Sev as well, so it doesnt matter what you do for it..i hope that you update soon :)
person Velvetina
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah I've just found this and I totally love it! Seriously love the idea itsvery fun and quirky. Anyway yes I love the idea of it being Harry/Draco/Severus with a nice bit of angst for draco when Sevvie and Harry get together and he's all alone and then the others like him *puppy eyes* lol either way cool story
person SeverinKSnape
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to say this is one of the more intertaining fics I've read in a long time. As for the threeway not a bad idea but what about Donavan/Draco? Keep writing the fic will tell you where to go ;)
~Sev
person antipyro
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, yeah!!! An update. I've missed you sooooooooo much.

These chapters were great and the 5th was nice and long. I hope your wrists are relaxing now. Massage is a good thing......

Personally, I think you've painted Draco as a dear friend for Harry and Harry only loves Severus. No, to the three way. I wouldn't mind if Draco conspired with Severus to help Harry along in getting together with Snape.....that might even be fun, something like an after hours DDR machine episode with Harry and Severus.

Great fun reading about having fun. Harry's melancholy should be brought up a bit, to help him realize his feelings for Severus, and act on them.

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year too.