rate_review Reviews

I think that the tree way may work but how would you write it? I hope to see more soon! lol *S* I love the music sollection

I AM SO LOVING YOU STORIES

Honestly... this whole story is great, much better than I expected. I was thinking I was about to read some spoof, humor fic. But really, this is very good... and I worship snarry. :)
Update soon!

Ok... Normally I wouldn't say anything, but this is bothering me.

I can take inconsistancy's and shit that was downright made up...

But not when I'm an avid DDR obbssessed freak who can't spell obbssessed to save the life of a moo-cow.

I like the story, and I like how you're using songs to express how the people are feeling.

Actually, I LOVE that.

I just HATE the fact that you totally fucked DDR in the ass. XD

There's no singing (unless you want to, which I suppose is why the characters are singing...)

Also...

It's like... impossible to sing AND dance at the same time. XD ESPECIALLY if you're playing a hard mode or something.

also...

I'm not sure what DDR machine allows a threeway, but that could be attributed to magic.

And finally...

It's almost an insult for those songs to be on a DDR machine. Seriously... I wanted to cry.

But I understand that you needed them for the story to progress, so no biggie.

one last thing... XD

The only way you can 'know' the steps is if you've played the song 49058203459829058290458 billion times. (I've memorized two songs... and the rest I'm vaguely familiar with...) You can't tell by the beat what and WHERE the step is going to be.

Now that I've finished being a supidly over obsessed freak (did I spell it right THAT time? XD) I'll shut up, and finish the story.

Mind you, I realize that you are probably not trying to be accurate in the ways of DDR, but sadly, I am the above. (Obsessed freak ring a bell?) So I couldn't just let it go. ^^;;

~Kupo~

I read the first "take" and I'm curious how you are going to change and if you are. I love DDR and I think that songs are a good way to see someone's true character. Plus I love a lot of the songs you have used. And one of my favorite songs reminds me of Sev...but I'm sure you have all the songs planned out so I'm just gonna tell you that I love the story and can't wait until you write more.

Yay!! Thank you thank you thank you!

Just wondering...whats the difference between this one and the other hp and the ddr machine one?

OK, you have got to continue this.. I love it.. Please update soon!

Yes, please make it a three-way.. I love it when they are all together!!

OMG you have to finish this! it's great! can't wait to read the rest :D xxx