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I love it

OMG u cant stop writeing now :P
seriously AMAZING story
Keep me updated
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I love this story. I like how Snape is the comic relief. Every time he was in the scene, I died laughing. Keep it up and I\'ll keep reading

im kinda curious, what happens to muggles when the light hits them?

hey loving it keep it up sorry that i haven't reviewed it before but i olny have time to read it i hope there's heaps more to come once again LOVIN' it

OMG!!!!! that was great, i was so torn between been grossed out and laughing my ass off at some of the other pairing....-shurders- don't even wanna think about....hahah

keep up the great work.

*~*Lilith leFey*~*

I must say that I didn't make it past the first chapter. The story itself was rather implausible, I felt. I'm for PWP as much as the next person, but even then, the thought of a bunch of people having sex on Harry's bed, then Harry just showing up out of the blue at the Slytherin dorms and ushered in like an old friend...ummm...no. If you want to write sex, just write the sex. Wrapping it in a plot that makes no sense, quite frankly, makes no sense.

Its so entirely cute. I love how all the Slyterins are helping the couple and helping them out. Ron so got what he deserved. And Dumbledore, now thats something that no one has done and I congratulate you on it. He deserves it too. I think its funny how snape keeps walking in on Dumbledore and Minerva. Such odd couples in this story but cuter then hell. I love it and I hope you update soon.

I hate to leave reviews that are harsh, and I hope this doesn't seem so to you, but I tried to read your fic and simply couldn't make it past the first chapter and a half. You need a beta. If you have a beta now, then I revise my statement to: You need a competent beta. I can tell you're trying to reach for a plot in this fic, and honestly, while I applaud your efforts, it kind of fell flat for me. Have you read the books? Because your characterisations are kind of all over the place. Not to mention simple canon mistakes that are rather littered throughout. Email me for further concrit if you're really interested.

W00T! W00T! W00T! Get the idea? I love the imagination in this story. I also love "running jokes" and what I call "everyday jokes". Funny things that happen throughout our regular day. Poor Snape (yes you read correctly) I actually felt a bit sorry for that guy....now as for Dummydore...he deserves all the haunting that he is getting...(you would think that he would get the idea that it isn't good to keep secrets from Harry like that...after all, all he has to do is read a few of these fanfics to see what the results of doing so are...hee hee hee) can't wait to read more :) raie Ladieraie@nc.rr.com