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person Afraidofreality
schedule April 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
amazing..
update soon
x
person momoko
schedule April 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapters, bye
person Sammy -.-zzz
schedule April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think your endings are wrong for the latin. What you put are not comands, and that\'s what they were suppose to be. Usually the words will end in an \'o\', yes?
person MAZDASPAZ
schedule April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Can\'t wait for more! Keep writing. Poor Severus... the guys just keeps coming into things at the wrong time. Dumbledore and McG... that\'s interesting and disturbing. lol
person sando
schedule April 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
person Argo
schedule April 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Err... Can you explain, how in 4 chapter \"Harry slid half to the side, still inside of Draco and both fell asleep curled up together cutely....\", but in 5 chapter Draco appeared to be \" with a naked, even sexier than before Harry Potter on his lap\" and Harry \"rocked his hips sharply and hissed himself as Draco rubbed up against that sensitive spot inside him\"? I just wondered how * in their sleep * they managed to trade positions so... completely? :)
person l\'etje
schedule April 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is very very good story and want to know what they are so keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Queen Anne
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Holy HELL!!! That was so damn hot my royal ass slid to the floor! Now I\'ve got to change my panties as well as send my guards to make sure your muse stays safe for future chapters! I WANT MORE!
person bobbie
schedule April 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh i really like this story..cant wait to read more,,please post more soon. what happend to voldemort and whats going on with them
person Aradia
schedule April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG this tory is awsome. pls pls pls update soon