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person Death in a Pink Boa
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"....where he found Dumbledore and Minerva kissing.....\'GAH!\'\" that is funny!

Write more, I do like.

Going at it like bunnies! *giggles*

person Jemi
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the first chapter, and the fact that there is a second chapter makes me all happy. I like it a lot and hope you do continue. As to what trixrstrange said in his/her review about the latin, I don\'t know if that person has ever taken latin, but it would depend of the case you are using. From the looks of it, you are using the \'to be\' form, and that works. So basically, you\'re saying \'to tickle.\' I wouldn\'t worry about it too much, since translating into any language is more than looking up words and their translated equivalents. So, great story, its fun, sexy and has Draco/Harry goodness. Major bonus there.
person Phoenix Black
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I love how Draco made Sev apologize! Hehe! Please continue! *puppy dog eyes*

And could you maybe email me when/if you update? Please?
person trixrstrange
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do believe that there is one slight error in your story. Normally I don\'t go pulling a \'Hermione\' on people BUT, with this ONE particular word in latin, I will make an exception. Now, for anyone who has ever looked at the Hogwarts crest they will see the following words underneath the crest; \'Draco dormiens nunquam titillandus\', translated all over the HP realm as \'Never tickle a sleeping dragon\'. So with that translation of the latin words, titillandus is the proper word.

Ok, with that said. Brilliant FF, hott as hell, wish there was a bit more on the threesome action between Blaise/Draco/Harry because that\'s a Slytherin sandwich with a hot dreamy Gryffindor filling.

Can\'t wait to read more.

Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

Trix ^_^

PS: http://www.hp-lexicon.org/hogwarts/w_pl_hogwarts.html Is where I got all the information on the translation of the latin words. Now it\'s a fan site, but IS authorized and recognized by JK Rowling herself.
person Alexa
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, but.... If you are going to make this into a bonding story, I think you should just stop here or after the next chapter. They are really all the same after the initial courting. If you are not going to make in into a typical bonding... and plan to change more than just a few little things, then... PLEASE CONTINUE.

Because I really liked the humor, and the oudasity of making the school into such a fun place. I hope you keep that tone if you continue. :-)

Thank you for a fun read. :-)
person prncssmanda
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MMMM!!! Nice. I loved it!
person makun
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its not too believable but i like it that way cause it opens many windows and doors of the imagination and this was funny! and hot at the same time. and if you feel that you are able, write more!
person Death in a Pink Boa
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please do continue. The smut is lovely. I know you\'ve got it as a Harry/Draco pairing, but it wouldn\'t hurt to let other people play with them more.
person Seris
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I so want you to continue. That ending has got me very curious. What was that, anyway? Hmph. Very curious. Heh. :)
person Stacy
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, poor Snape. I like how accepting the Slytherins are about the glow and willing to have Harry move in. More please!