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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO......wanna read on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really, REALLY wanna read the next chapter!!!!
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, it has that darker atribute that I love. Please keep updating it, I just love it so much. I really admire the way you write as well, and hope that you continue to use the same technique throughout this story.
Your Devoted Reader,
Artemis Adriane
Your Devoted Reader,
Artemis Adriane
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I can\'t wait for chapter 3! Have a great time in Arizona!
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Duckie, tighten up the punctuation...Commas are the breathing spaces; they give cadence to your speech. As you can see, semi-colons are the tangent keepers; they allow one to place similar or even contradictory ideas in the same sentence.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m feeling it. I like the story so far. Can\'t wait to see what happens.
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like! Draco Malfoy being the \"hero\" for once was unexpected, but a good suprise. I can\'t wait to read more.
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this is already breaking my heart. Harry seems broken. How could his whole house turn on him like that? More please.
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good start, keep up the good work update soon!