rate_review Reviews

Neat story. Needs some grammer help but I'm willing to put up with the mistakes as I just love the plot. :D

Wow!!! That was great! I <3 melo-drama!!!

First, for someone whose first language isn't English, you're doing a half-way decent job. Second, some of the sentences don't make sense; they are confusing due to the misuse of words and other problems. Unfortunately, you are missing words and things like -ed and -ing at the end of words needing them; you are also missing necessary punctuation like commas (,), semi-colons (;), etc.

I recommend you find a good English dictionary, a good thesaurus, and a grammar and punctuation guide. I also recommend a visit to the hp-lexicon.org site so that you can keep canon facts and spellings straight.

I can;t wait for the next chapter of this story to come out it's so good. I really hope that Draco is able to help Harry and help him regain his soul.

~Gracy

hey this is a great story keep up the good work, i hope you update again soon

wow! this is pretty good ^_^ update soon!

I liked it. But I have to admit, your typo\'s make it a little \"cough, cough\" hard to read your really interesting story.
Keep writing anyway. \"smile\"

The story has some spelling and grammer errors that need to be corrected. It\'s a good story and I hope that you continue updating. A good way to deal ith editing a story is to ignore the mistakes until you have finished writing the story. That way you are less likely to lose the story to riters block. When you finish writing the story, con one of your readers into fixing it for you.

I was going to offer to beta hen you finish your story, but for some reason my w is only working about half the time.

updaet soon please this is amazing