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for Unexpected Results

by IGGY

schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very very good. it reminds me alot of my fic \"edge of seventeen\" but i cannot wait for more yay for sunday lol more!
person ura
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks promising. Post more!
person LPhoenix
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i can honestly say that your summary got me to read this story. i can also honestly say that it is one of the best intro\'s i\'ve ever read. i look forward to reading more from you. :)
person WretchedScar
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes. Yes, please. Please update. Want another chapter. Brilliant!
person chantalmalfoy
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Poor Harry... he\'s so depressed. I can\'t wait for the next chapter>
person Kat Potter
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Two words: Love it! Can\'t wait for more!
person Krazy
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That\'s all I really have to say. Wow. That\'s very erotically writen and I can\'t wait for more!! *probably shouldn\'t have been in class while reading that*

:blink:

*innocent eyes*

*~* Krazy *~*
person Priss368
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start! I wonder what their reactions will be in the morning! One word though, they usually use \"Merlin\" as an expletive. Can\'t wait to read more! Priss
person Melissa
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'ll be honest, I never review. But I really liked this first chapter and I already know I am looking forward to know. Nothing pleases me more than knowing a fic is complete. I thought this was a well written chapter and I liked the plot idea. Can\'t wait for more!
Melissa
person Carey
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this! Sorry nothing constuctive to say (final exam time=me braindead) but I love dominant Draco and this scene was HOT. Can\'t wait till the next chapter\'s out!