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for Every Light

by Laney

person SutekhSnape
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You got me all teary! It\'s interesting the way songs are interpreted by different people and therefore affect them. You took your emotions and brought them to life in this story in a touching way. I like it.
person Mirestelfea
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was good, both sweet and sad, glad you had to get that one out.
person Anon
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate you, this story made me cry... Good job but try to use less lyrics there annoying...
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I swear I love this fic so much. Thank you... THANK YOU so much for writing it. It truly brings many tears to my eyes every time i read it

Thank you - Jessica
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont know what it is about this story. But everytime i read it i just cant help bawling my eyes out. This is the only story that has every made me cry like that, it truly moved me. I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE IT ... please never change it. And PLEASE write song fics like this more often


Lots of love - Jessica
person antipyro
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the most touching and heartfelt story I\'ve read in a long, long time. It sums up Harry and Severus\' lives very poignantly. I must remember to listen to the song it was written about.

I hope that you aren\'t sad anymore, we all suffer losses, but we heal. That is the true meaning of life, going on, continuing to live, in the real world. Life isn\'t fair, but death is not the answer. If you want to talk, you have my email.

Please continue to write stories, you may find some release in them, I\'m sure.
person QIK
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually, that\'s a very sad little plot bunny. But indee, it left me with a hint of a smile on my face. It\'s really cute and I absolutely love the line: \"I\'m warning you right now, Severus, that if you don\'t come back before the clock strikes midnight, I will turn the lights off\" I really chuckled when I read it and this is quite an achievement regarding that it\'s 6 am and I should have been off to sleep about four hours ago.
Just out of curiousity: How about a warning about character death? In my opinion not necessary, but concerning rules and stuff.
However, really good story, well written and all.

Patrick
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. I have to tell you how i loved this beautiful, short, sweet fic. It is truly one of the most memorable fics i have ever read. It was one of the only ones that has truly made me cry, and i absolutley love it. It is perfectly beautiful.

Thank you - Jessica