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for Cracking the Gold

by Krazy

person ura
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Draco a vampire? Why did he call Harry food?


It is up to you how you want to post the story. I am fine with anything. Just keep writing.
person lacquer
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Draco a vampire of some sort? The length is better than the other chapters. Perhaps a bit more, but the latest length is okay.
person LPhoenix
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grovels at authors feet* anothing for another chappie! anything!! *begs*
person Page
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic so far. From some statements Draco made I\'m assuming he\'s not exactly human anymore...but that\'s okay because I like this fic! Please Continue and Update Soon!!!
person sharon
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In reading the authors note I might well add that this is a great story. I do think that the chapters are quite small and that goes hand in hand with the fact that you are writing in such a way that your readers are anxiously awaiting the next installment and when it is too short we end up disappointed. Keep up the great work and try to let your writing flow from you and let your imagination go and stop worrying about weather you writing in a particular style that someone might like or not like, just have fun and if people are interested they will come along for the ride. Just give us full chapters because I cant wait until you update again. Keep up the great work! Tally ho
person sharon
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I will have to admit the enjoyment factor on this story is truly lost when you see the next chapter up and get all excited to find that there really wasnt anything written anyway. This chapter was so short that I felt as though the author was having a laugh at our expense.
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Things just aren\'t looking up for poor Harry! I can\'t wait for chapter 7!
person look at my ding-a-ling-ling
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie but unfortunately it didnt have as much info as I had hoped... :o(
But here\'s to the future...cant wait to see the other DE\'s reactions to Harry!!
person ura
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too short a chapter. Write more!
person LPhoenix
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*eyes wide* oh this is getting good!!!!