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for Cracking the Gold

by Krazy

person sbkar
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I should give you a dictionary...there are some words that are misused, but, I\'m too tired.

These last two chapters wore me out! The rollercoaster of emotions Harry decided to ride are exhausting. He\'ll never be \"Harry\" again, will he? And just what mischief will Severus get up to? When will Ron make an appearance again?
person Mare
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*phew* I almost thought it was gone there for awhile. \"Cracking the Gold\" is probably one of the reasons I check updates every day. I\'m sooo happy that you posted that note! Sorry for the college crap, and I hope it\'ll slow down soon for you! Don\'t give up, it\'s too good a story!

Mare
person myniephoenix
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i got so excited for a second.... i am still here.. update soon
person nikki
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am only up to chapter 29 but would you come up with some new ideas all they seem to be doing is eating and having sex. do something interseting with them,.
person LadyX
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man..I really need to re-read the first chapters...I read them when you first posted this and I belive a commented once but then I stopped for some reason.. I dunno maybe i forgot about it...So i decided to read it again and realized Hey Wait a min I read this bit *skips a few chapters* and picked up where I left off...I didnt realize it had been so long..I was thinking like 17 or 18. Poor Harry doesnt realize whats going on. Draco best help him.. I also noticed the OBVIOUS vampire in Draco..but whaty was with the random veela stuff? it was only brought up like 5 times at the very most..The only reason I remeber it at all is becasue I have been up for the past few days readiing this. I love this fic with a fiery passion and cant wait for more....I can see this being like a never ending fic. I can easill see it going on as many more chapters as there already are. Kinda nifty that Voldemart has a blind spot for Draco..I see many good things that that could help. seriosly acnt wait for more and sorry if this is really jump around-ish that is just how my mind works.Thats the reason I cant wirtye fics..I can get insparation form something and have a good plot...theni get anothetr one for the same thing like with Song fics there are so many up there it is unreal i just cant post them because i need to pick one version of all the different ones and I cant...ok I\'m dont wasting your time with this uber long *for me at least*review. I love this with a fiery passion and hope you update soon.
person avihenda
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* That.was.so.good! *cries* Thank you, thank you, thank you. I found harrys answers when he woke up with no memories quite good and fun. They are really taken from nowhere. lol wife and dog! I found that pure as pure brilliance :-) and Rafael, what a name to decide out of the blue that it\'s yours. Draco must have been so comfused over that one. Maybe it was a memory altering potion ;-)
I really hope you write more soon. I know how collage can eat up time so I\'ll be patient, but hopeful. ^_^
It was great to see you update again and I wish you all the luck in the world with collage!
person The doctors In
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Could you please format chapter thirty four it doesnt seem to fit the page frame. Thanks
person Nite
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* that\'s mean, why can\'t you go alittle longer? Can you please give me a hint what happens? IS Draco going to show harry the torture room again? Please update and send me a e-mail

Laters
-Nite
person Rayven
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! Update soon! I\'ll die if you don\'t. This is the best D/s and Draco/Harry fiction I have ever read. Each chapter captivated me and got better and better as the story continued. The sex scenes were orgasmic. I throughly enjoyed every one of them. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Will this harry fall in love with draco? One question, Is this years after the war or months after the war, I don\'t understand the timeframe completely, has Voldie taken control of the whole wizarding world? Otherwise I love this story! You\'re a great writer....Thanks.
person emma
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this was such a sad chapter i never thought harry would really take the potion. will he get his memories back?