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for Cracking the Gold

by Krazy

person LPhoenix
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay an update!!! i\'m so excited!!!! *hugs author* nice work... you are weaving magic!
person Lioncourt
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draco can read his mind?! That is so totally hot! And poor little Harry doesn\'t have a clue...*smirks* I think the thing with Voldemort is a bit disturbing. He\'s so old...and icky, and...old. But I\'m not going to be all prejudiced until I\'ve read it. What worries me more is probably if Harry is going to survive it or not...especially with the scar and his menthal health and all. Oh no, oh no, oh no... this is going to be baaad! Poor little Harry... *sniffs and pouts*
Anyway, the idea with Harry/Snape got me real interested. I have a thing for Snape, you know. I really think you should consider putting Snape into this. I wonder where he would fit in...on the good or the bad side? It sort of feels it would be on the bad side... And just a thought; Couldn\'t Snape be able to read minds too? It doesn\'t sound too far fetched when you read the books...
Oh I almost forgot; You are such a tease! How could you end the chapter right there?!! You better update fast missy!
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry is his. Draco is right. He bonded Harry to him and while Harry might think he still has some fight in him. He\'s lost. Can\'t wait for chapter 16!
person sisko66002(not signed in)
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Each chapter is better then the last. keep up the good work.
person Sakuya
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! need to know what draco did! if not, then more slashy goodnbess will be enough to sate me, for a while that is.... MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! mmmmmmmmmm HOTNESSS! update sooon!!!!!!! xo
person Lioncourt
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you owe me a pair of legs! I\'m afraid my own has been turned into jelly... This is, as you\'ve heard, very VERY good. I really like Harry in this fic, so sweet, so innocent. And Draco... well, he\'s bad! (In a good way of course.) *drools* And I\'ve been thinking about the \"we\" stuff. The first thing that came into mind was Lucius actually. I mean, since he\'s Draco\'s father he should sort of \'own\' Harry too...right? Perhaps not. But I must say I find the thought rather trilling... Oh, dont mind me. It\'s just my imagination running wild again.
person Lioncourt
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And I just looove Draco being all vampire or whatever. Adds a lot of spice! And this fluttering feeling in my stomach tells me next chapter is going to be good, so hurry up! Pleeease!! *throws herself at author\'s feet* I\'ll do whatever it takes!
person ura
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am just curious why Draco eats normal food if he is a vampire? or is he not? Also why does Draco keep Harry in the collar?
person sethian
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!! What\'s that spell ?? I can\'t wait to see ^.^ Verrry nice story :O)
person icestar
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter.

harrys innocent eh? not surprising. i doubt he would ever take sexual stuff at more than face value, and some of the phrases are odd...

nice chapter