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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yet another great chapter...... keep up the good work... :)
update soon... i look forward to this story when i check for updates...
update soon... i look forward to this story when i check for updates...
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draco being a non-traditional vampire was obvious but I had thought that perhaps either his innate magic or perhaps some spell was responsible for the unusual aspects. I hope you update soon because it seems that each chapter is better then the one that came before it and gives me some much needed inspiration in repairing and finishing my own fics.
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry is way too much into sweets.
I thought vampires eat only blood.
Why is Harry confused all the time?
I thought vampires eat only blood.
Why is Harry confused all the time?
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so all harry has to do is ax himself and old voldie dies? how sad.....
i\'m glad that harry is falling into his role with draco tho, quite a confusing mix of emotions i imagine...
update soon..
i\'m glad that harry is falling into his role with draco tho, quite a confusing mix of emotions i imagine...
update soon..
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Need chapter 21! Harry plans to kill himself? No! He can\'t succeed!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Every time i read your fic i\'m amazed with your talent... These last chapters were really good! This Harry\'s plan was so cute.. so childish and desparete: cute in a Harry way. Draco said he adores Harry... *fefs smiles*
I\'m so curious... now i\'m beginning to think that in the end Draco and snape will help harry to kill Voldemort but it will be with lots of Drama since his death would induce harry\'s as well.. Oh, and please forgive me for my abssence but i was kind of depressed with some things in my life and not even slash could make me happy.. But now i\'m back!! =D
Well, good party for you, have lots of fun and inspiration and when you get back give us another incredible chapter!! Ciau!
I\'m so curious... now i\'m beginning to think that in the end Draco and snape will help harry to kill Voldemort but it will be with lots of Drama since his death would induce harry\'s as well.. Oh, and please forgive me for my abssence but i was kind of depressed with some things in my life and not even slash could make me happy.. But now i\'m back!! =D
Well, good party for you, have lots of fun and inspiration and when you get back give us another incredible chapter!! Ciau!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draco did the counter charm? After torturing him all day. Poor Harry! Can\'t wait for chapter 20!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amazing chapter... update again soon!!!!! truely amazing!!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww!!!!! that was so sweet!!!!! ( well *i* think so at least XD ) can\'t wait till you update, awwww! t\'was an adowible chappie ^-^ xo
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. :) Although there are a few repetitive mistakes. Like:
[Harry sighed inwardly before reluctantly biting the sweet again. He kept his eyes low in shame. He couldn\'t believe he was reduced to this.
Draco smiled, deciding that perhaps he\'d have to do this more often, considering that he quite liked the almost blush that kept tinging Harry\'s cheeks.]
and
[Draco sighed, shaking his head again, fingers resting against Harry\'s shoulder, \"Nothing? You didn\'t hear anything?\"
Harry was slightly freaked out by this. He took a few steps back, trying to avoid Mafloy\'s hands and fingers. He looked at the ground. He hated this. He knew what Malfoy was meaning now...he should have picked up sooner. What else could he be talking about in this room? \"No....\"]
Also, you should try starting a sentence without using Harry and Draco so often. I\'m still hoping for more!! Keep up the great work!
[Harry sighed inwardly before reluctantly biting the sweet again. He kept his eyes low in shame. He couldn\'t believe he was reduced to this.
Draco smiled, deciding that perhaps he\'d have to do this more often, considering that he quite liked the almost blush that kept tinging Harry\'s cheeks.]
and
[Draco sighed, shaking his head again, fingers resting against Harry\'s shoulder, \"Nothing? You didn\'t hear anything?\"
Harry was slightly freaked out by this. He took a few steps back, trying to avoid Mafloy\'s hands and fingers. He looked at the ground. He hated this. He knew what Malfoy was meaning now...he should have picked up sooner. What else could he be talking about in this room? \"No....\"]
Also, you should try starting a sentence without using Harry and Draco so often. I\'m still hoping for more!! Keep up the great work!