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for Cracking the Gold

by Krazy

person sethian
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was a sad chapter along with the 23rd...hope things will get better...
person icestar
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh, possessive much draco?

and ron, silly boy....

nice chapter though ^_^ heh, voldie IS a coward... and harry is reading too deep in his own action.
person LPhoenix
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries for harry and ron* update again soon
person Fefs
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O What the fuck?? I\'m out of words...
I hate this chapter with such a passion and i can\'t understand how that makes me LOVE this fic EVEN MORE... What a hell of a plot you created!! Oh My God!! This punishment was so real and sick just like Voldemort itself.. Crazy sick perv BASTARD!!! This chapter held such a drama and emotion and ahhhhhh!! I really have no words! Ahhh, poor Harry! But Draco\'s punishment will be having his pet broken.. Cause after this harry\'ll be as good as dead.. Poor thing, raped in front of his best friend. I hope Draco falls in love hard and that harry make him suffer byond what is understandble.
I\'m so proud of Ron.. He is not broken! he calls Draco a ferret, he almost hurt himlself to try to help Harry. Wow.. I\'m completely out of word, i simply can not imagine what will happen next!! I can\'t... Please update really soon cause if you don\'t after this chapter you\'ll be even worst than Voldemort to your fans, really.
Hugs genius! I recomend for you to hide since if RoWling find you... =D
Hugs!

Ps: ok, i like you again, but only because i was lying before, when i said i didn\'t like you anymore.
person thrnbrooke
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for chapter 23! Ron is alive! Is Hermione? Ron isn\'t broken! Poor Harry! Now Draco knows. Harry was a virgin.
person Rose
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Another chapter. Harry will live, right? Right?! Well yes, unless you were planning to end the story very soon, Harry would have to live. When you first said toy, I thought you meant sex toy. That\'s what Ron is, right? It\'s just, the way you wrote it, it sounded more like Draco just enjoys beating him up. Which is okay, just not nearly as exciting. Update quickly! And don\'t have Harry on bad terms with Draco for too long.
person WretchedScar
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy fudge! UPDATE the bloody hell SOON!
person Fefs
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhh!! I love my hair!! My beautifull hair is going to the floor since my dear (ex-dear!!) author don\'t give me another chapter!! I\'m pulling all out!! I\'m going crazy here!! PLEASE UPDATE!! About this toy thing.. Won\'t Harry be really pissed of if he sees Draco is a son of a bich that is playing with his best friend? I mean.. this will get things a little harder for Draco to get Harry\'s heart (i still have hope...) But them again,you love to complicate things.. Humpf!! UPDATE PLEEEEASE!! Ok, that\'s IT!! I don\'t like you anymore!!

Ps: What\'s the problem with that somebody that said all those rude things about your fic? Talk about it! I was shoked when i read it! Don\'t like it, don\'t read it... Oo

NO HUGS FOR YOU!! >=/
person Tiffany
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that\'s the best story ever! I switch over from fanfiction dot net to this and haven\'t reveiwed on this site yet, your story was so good i just had to leave feedback. Maybe this will make you put up more chapters like right now? I hope so. that was a terrible cliffie, then again so is everyother story i read\'s last chapter
person Rose
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DRACO\'S TOY IS RON! ISN\'T he! Well, of corse he must be, for Ron and Hermione can\'t be dead, not both of them anyways. I LOVE this story. please update really really really soon!!! i had an idea I was going to suggest to you, before I read this chapter, but what you are doing is much better. You\'re a fucking Genious!

Update!