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for The House

by sesshomarufangirl

person zentiis
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
definatly different.......@_@
never came across a \'whore\' harry fic before, but hey theirs a first time to everything! ^_^
hey.....does that mean i lost my whore-harry-fic virginity to you?!? *blushes* oh you!
lol, but yeah i liked the fic!
person Alexa
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I like your story, it\'s quite interesting. I\'ll wait for your next chapter - hope it will be up soon.

One request - when Harry interracts with his friends from the house, could you put in some adjectives near their names - so that we remember which one of the guys is it? Because I personally don\'t remember them all by their names, yet. If you remind of their character for the next few chapters, it will make it easier to read (Iwon\'t have to go back to the first chapter and check who they are) and after a few chapters I\'ll start recognising them just be the names. (I think I\'m not the only one who muiht have that problem, that\'s why I\'m asking.)
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I keep expecting one of his clients to be someone he goes to school with. Can\'t wait for chapter 3! What happens next?
person elecktra
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I loved it!! I soo can
person Lucius\' and Snape\'s secret LOVER!!
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Stop with the teaser....And I already Hate this Josh Guy.(slams fist in hand) Dude I wanna kill somebody. So stop with the suspense and update already...p-please ^_______^
person yana
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a very nice beginning, very interesting.
I hope you continue.
person Storm
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm seems interesting. You could take it so many different ways. I hope you turn harry sub!

person thrnbrooke
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And no one not even his friends know the truth? And how is Harry able to go to school? Can\'t wait for more!
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting
lets see more