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by DivineAngel

person firewall
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad. Good but really really sad.
person sheedy
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job!!! Sometimes you just have to have a tragic ending and this one was great.
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really, really, really loved this story, a lot! But I was very disappointed by the ending; no warnings/clues in the fic, I really didn't see that one coming...
person lisa
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh Noooo!!!!!!!!!! My Severus is dead. Thats so sad! and it did bring tears to the eyes. Poor Hermione. Very good chappie though, even if it was sad. Love the story, sad ending and all. it is just too bad it couldn't have ended happier.
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well hell. I'll try to write something consructive if I can quit crying. Man, why'd you have to go there? That was so sad! But, I'll reluctantly admit it was a good ending to a great story. OK, I'm off to pout now. See you next round! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs,
Killer K
person ccino
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BUGGER! Ive downloaded this story complete and have just finished ch21. I cant go any further. I wanna know what happens next, but its like a realy good suspense movie when you hide behind a cushion and barely peep thro your fingers. Cant quite bring myself to see what the outcome will be. Not many stories get me this way. You are a brilliant writer. DONT STOP, Pleeeeeez.
J
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How could you do that to us? That was a great chapter by the way!!!!

If my Snapey is dead... I'll cry!
person a_reader
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!
person takemeaway
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am saddened that you chose to end the story this way, but I know very well that not all stories have a happy ending...the world just would not be interesting if they did. This story was a beautiful one, and I loved it to it's very end. I am not a fan of DM/HG, but in this particular instance, I hope they could perhaps find some happiness in each other. I don't know how I would feel about a RL/HG story, since I have never read one, but I like your writing style so much I will most likely read it. See you around the site
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me he's OK?! Please! Man, that was certainly action packed! What's up with Dumbeldore? Please update soon!!! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Killer K