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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww didums, simplewords. The paragraphs are fine, unlike some stories on this site that are practiacally double spaced with gaps between every bloody sentence! (*Cough* check your own stuff *cough*) I guess this author\'s paragraphs are just too long for you. How do you cope when you read books? No random spaces between lines there, that must be really hard for you. Oh wait, you probably don\'t read books do you? Can you read joined up writing? Or is that too hard as well? Ha!
Nice work Divine, like the story loads!
Nice work Divine, like the story loads!
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start.....I can see the relationship between Hermione and Snape forming slowly....which is what it should be at this point. Can\'t wait to read more
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
From one Angel to another let me just say...I love this story so far!!!!! I am really looking foward to seeing where you are going to take this. I like your Snape. Shows his softer more human side. I will definitly be following this story closely!!
I also loved the Remus/Hermione beginning. Make our leading man jealous!! I like Remus very much.
TaintedAngel xxx
P.S Thank you so much for putting my story \"Is This Desire?\" into your fav list! I am so flattered!!! :-)
I also loved the Remus/Hermione beginning. Make our leading man jealous!! I like Remus very much.
TaintedAngel xxx
P.S Thank you so much for putting my story \"Is This Desire?\" into your fav list! I am so flattered!!! :-)
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooh i like this, and i NEVER read het! snapes a tad ooc, but ya kinda have to make him to make him fit *lol* love it anyway, update soon
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice so far. please continue!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please do continue! Ik\'m loving this so far. (: When does it get...a bit more...romanticy or w/e? ;)
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oo! I love being the first reviewer.... Anyway, you are off to a great start. Adding the tension with Remus in the very begining was an excelent idea, and I can\'t wait to see where you take this.
Just one suggestion. Sometimes the paragraphs seemed to blend together and it became a little hard to read. Just work on that and your story will be even better!
Cheers,
~ simplewords
Just one suggestion. Sometimes the paragraphs seemed to blend together and it became a little hard to read. Just work on that and your story will be even better!
Cheers,
~ simplewords
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi hun, I saw you had a new story up and I had to read it right away, I love it! It\'s great how you don\'t just keep to the same pairing for all your fics. I\'ve never been big on HG/SS, but maybe you\'ll change my mind, When Lines Are Blurred was soooo good, this is bound to be fantastic too!