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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic so far, my only slight criticism is that Severus is a bit OOC, a bit too feeling, especially with the crying bit. It\'s very rare that anyone can pull off Severus crying in a story and get away with it by me. It wasn\'t horribleby any means, but just keep in mind, this guy is a snarky bastard. Keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon!
~Ailo
~Ailo
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter a lot. SS in tears, HG comforting him. It was very touching. Good luck with the job.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was sooo good! I love the slow build up of sexual tension as you mentioned (Girl With the Pearl Earring), it makes the scene when they actually do \'connect\' all the more rewarding! Really looking forward to another chapter! Hope the plot bunnies co-operate!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Keep writing!!!!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok girl, I thought you couldn\'t top that first contact between H & DM in WLAB, but you did. Jees, this just keeps getting better and better! Oh wow. Update :-)
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Indeed. This is terrific stuff - the story is unfolding without getting tediously \"plotty\", the kiss was worth waiting for and there seems to be plenty going on with Ron and Harry in the background. Actually, Ron\'s crush has some great comedy potential in it which I would enjoy seeing exploited to the full. Harry is emerging as a tragic figure - like Lupin. I want more of this.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow really good writing... keep \'em coming please!
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god, both 6 and 7 were wonderful chappies and I don\'t think I can handle all this sexual tension, gah! You must relive some of it women, it\'s about time they shagged! :X Not that I haven\'t loved the buildup, the story is deliciously brilliant thusfar!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still brilliant! But where\'s the smut?! You write such fabulous erotic scenes, I love the tension in the last chapter, I want more!! Guys, if you haven\'t read Angel\'s other fics you really should!