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by DivineAngel

schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A realistic ending - though I still feel like ripping your head off. I hope Hermione rode off into the sunset, and no ridiculous endings like DMHG happened. She has much to explore - travelling the world for the next ten to thirty years might do her some good.

Arthur killing Voldemort was superb.

I like that you wrote Harry like he is in canon - as a selfish ignorant rush-headlong-into-danger stupid world-revolves-around-me git.

person Anon
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person DB1
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@23 aww sad ending....i loved the story!!!

*DB*
person Mmoirai
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I didn't see that coming. I am a 28 year old adult who has been sitting up all night reading this rather well written fic and...he dies!!!! And I am bawling! You've broken my heart!!!!!!!!!
person Jade Whisk
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Perfect. Beautiful, bittersweet plot. And the sex was pretty damn good too! Seriously, DA, start writing pure originals and go knock on some publishers' doors...
person Jade Whisk
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
..but don't you dare abandon us! It's getting so that I can't start the day without a fix of your glorious prose. ;P
person maddy
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was beautiful.
person alliekat
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is quite possibly the most moving ending i've ever read. i'll admit, i wanted the happy ending but i'm a big sucker at heart and need to read about them in order to have faith in real life. i don't think it would have had the same impact though. this truly brought a tear to my eye and pulled at my heatstrings.
person Lizzy
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no, you DIDN'T!!! Killing Severus before any really good lemons??? HOW DARE YOU??? Bring him back!!!
person Sugarplumfairy
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK, I bow to your superior storytelling skills. Brilliant. Love you so much. I cried.

Lizzy: LOL!!! Did you read all 23 chapters? No good lemons?!! Crikey, there were some really juicy ones in there.