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for Mind Reading Isn\'t Just A Myth

by MazzaMann

person sallie
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sallie: \"Yay for Draco and his potty mind!\"
*Throws hexes at doxies making them do cheerleading routines*
Doxies: \"Draco Draco he\'s our man. If he can\'t swear no one can. Yeaaaay!\"
Sallie: \"Now begon or however I get rid of you doxies.\"


That chapter was great. Make Draco tell of the Headmaster more in his head! *snigger snigger*
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OooO! I like! I like lots and lots and lots! (whimper) Though I got confuzzled on who was talking when. Could you perhaps put Draco\'s thoughts (since he seems to be the center of the fic) in italics? Or... or.. yeah. Are Harry\'s thoughts in astrics (*)? I think I got it all right... Yay! On to the next chapter!
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2... AHA! I couldn\'t stop laughing! GREAT job!!
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAH!! HOW COULD YOU STOP THERE!! WHY THERE!! WAH! I want more! Update now! Puhleash? *-*
person FoxyCharlie
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woooha! I need more! XD this is great! just awesome, and it could be soo much funto read, if you get to the sex! more fun than it already is I mean! =3
person sallie
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Oh for fuck
person LPhoenix
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i want more all right. :)
person Zentiis
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
he he he i like it! it is delicious, i look forward to your next update!
person Liv
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update as soon as possible!
Umm... the 1st chapter was a little hard to understand, until it became more understandable. Besides that there isn\'t anything wrong with it from what I\'ve read, or know.
I really love your story!
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! Draco will know every last secret Harry has. Will he really tell everyone?