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for Mind Reading Isn\'t Just A Myth

by MazzaMann

person Alexa
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know it\'s a great story! :-) And just fun to read.
Just technical - you used \"those boy\" instead of \"this boy\" when tlking about the swollen lips,
and in \"I just Harry Potter dry, and damn did it feel wonderful\", I think you\'re missing \"sucked\".
person MB
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooo he loves him!!!
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Draco\'s in lust! My how fast things change!
person sabbitha
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am sad to report that my ice cream has melted, and there seems to be a wee puddle of drool next to it...*cleans up drool before anyone sees*
LOVE IT! PWEEEEEEEEZ update? pweez pweez PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ?
i really, really like it. the style, EVERYTHING!
*is waiting for updatey*
hey, wait! draco did not cum, did he? hmm..
person storm
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so interesting, I love the internal dialogue. great job, can\'t wait to read the update
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! This is too much fun! I can\'t wait for chapter 4!
person sallie
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Two points to the Hogwarts whore while the Boy-Who-Poisoned-Me has yet to score.
Good, my fans are laughing.\"

Guess I\'m officially a Draco fan now.
I wish I had his wit!
person Alexa
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it :-)
So funny! And every time he reads someone else\'s thoughts (besides Harry), it\'s interesting what will he hear. Could you keep him reading the thoughts of people other than Harry? Because what Harry will think is kinda expectable (it is a slash after all), but what others will.....

Thank you for the pleasure of reading this story :-)
person Brad
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THe story is really funny and a great read. I cant wait for the next chapter
person LPhoenix
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* oh that draco. ;)