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Hmmm. Bugger. I still liked it when I came to ch.21.
Now I

I love these chapters so much!
Thank for updating!!
Please go on soon

Brilliant. Reduced me to a pool of goo. A sappily smiling pool of goo. Love your word combinations and you have one of the HOTTEST Remus descriptions ever. YOU MUST WRITE MORE! Now. Now, please. I did want to point out one teeeeny weeeensy little mistake in the wonderful sex chapter -- you said Hermione lay \"prone\" beneath Remus, but prone means facedown. From the way he was kissing her collarbone and all, I think you meant to write \"supine\", which means face up!:) Remember the good ole \"prone float\" you have to learn when you get swimming lessons? :) Great read. Remus is a sex king.

\"Magenta flavoured narcoleptic\"!!!!!! LMAO!!! That was great!!! The rumors you came up with would totally have been used in the books!!! You are doing a really excellent job and I can\'t wait for the next chapter!!

Oh they are so cute!!! Can\'t wait to see everyone else\'s reactions!!! Keep up the good work and update soon, please!!!

Cutie there!!
I really love that...:
\"You should see what I turn into once a month...\" *rofl*
Fits me, fits me, really! ;o)

Please go on! Can\'t wait!

You are too good. The way Remus hunted her down...mmm...*licks lips* The stuff that \'came\' after that was pretty mindblowing too. And did I mention you are incredibly funny? You know, for a while I thought Remus would chicken out again, but then he didn\'t. Very satisfying. Thank you.

This is very funny! Even Snape screwed up...wati \'til Hemione finds out. Oh, dear, we are in trouble. :)
This was an unexpected find...I truly enjoyed reading this. Please continue.

Finally. It took em long enuf to get into bed,.,,, WOOT WOOT WOOT Update soon please.

I think that it was absolutely brilliant and I WANT MORE. How long will it be for the next update? You most certainly did not dissappoint well done