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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"There was a mad swirl of colors and patterns as she was swept up into his arms, her room a kaleidoscope around her as she was spun around, then dropped onto her bed. She bounced once on the satin comforter...before he came over her.\"
1, that was quick........even for a werewolf,
2.ewwww!!!!
soz couldn\'t resist, meekly going back to reading the rest of that chapter.lol
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1, that was quick........even for a werewolf,
2.ewwww!!!!
soz couldn\'t resist, meekly going back to reading the rest of that chapter.lol
:)))))))))
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* That is one of the sweetest fics I\'ve ever read, I was laughing all the time. I couldn\'t help it. You\'re a great writer, and I like how this story was written a little different to others... the dialog chapters every couple of chapters really helped set the pace. Just the first paragraph in the first chapter was great, I was laughing and showing everyone.
Woo you! You deserve an award or something for this.
Woo you! You deserve an award or something for this.
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! such a wonderful story! (and i\'ve only just read to chap. 17 or so) you do a very good job handling the characters. i especially love luipn\'s \"foot in mouth\" incidents. everyone should say hello when they come - in that is ^_~ i\'m off to read the rest now. keep up the good work!
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an extremely-amusing and very sweet story. I liked it quite a bit.
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was loads of fun. Very imaginative. Love Hermione and Remus together. Combining Snape and the Weasley twins was pure genius! Bravo!!!!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know it maybe a little late to leave a review, now that your story has ended, I was alittle busy with my own story, but anyway, your story was genious. I\'m getting ready to read your sequel. I\'m sure it will be just as good.
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! was worth staying up late for the read =)
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cute
Snape and Ginny? maby not,but it would make a funny short story
Snape and Ginny? maby not,but it would make a funny short story
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was hot. one thing though. not enough focus on the boobs. we need to feel like we are cupping them in our own hands. he needs to lick them, bite them. make her hurt and feel wonderful at the same time in her breasts