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JJ - I\'m a little confused as to who you mean here- \"And Harry\'s girl? You left her beaten and possibly sterile, but despite time moving forward, we don\'t know anything else?!?! Please don\'t keep us in suspense!\"

The only one who is sterile is Remus\'s wife, known in the story as Felicity. Harry introduced them, and she has been seen in several chapters.(i.e. wedding, shower, Christmas dinner). I\'m going to introduce Harry to his girl soon, though! I hope this clears things up.

PS - re JJ\'s question - JJ, you\'re like me - we read so much fanfic that we can get confused sometimes, especially all the Marriage Law fics. You might be thinking about Kassandra\'s story \"The Laws of Love\" - Ch 6 has Harry\'s fiancee Melanie in the hospital, after she gets attacked by Slytherins (and possibly made sterile) because they don\'t like her being Harry\'s fiancee. That story is on Potionsmaster; I don\'t think it\'s here on AFF.

OH So sweet, it sliek pixi sticks sweet! Can we please have some more?

So cool, I like it what took you? Oh well hope to read more soon, cues this is a great fic!

Ch 16 - very nice to see Severus getting along so well with everyone. Poor Percy; he was nice enough to warn his mom about the Death Eater proposal, then he feels he has to propose to Rosmerta just \'cuz he got drunk and was carried up to her empty bed. You\'ve got a thing for interesting couples with a big age difference! Quite unique. And thanks again for keeping Hermione below the Lucius-radar.

Ch 17 - lovely Christmas! I\'m glad Severus finally has a nice holiday. Will Draco be seeing Ginny over the hols? Did Severus buy gifts for his sister and niece and Lupin as welll? Thanks for the new chapter! (and thanks for keeping Hermione below the Lucius-radar.... Hermione as Draco\'s stepmom, and Hermione as Ginny\'s mother-in-law - too strange!)

A merry story...I liked the pairing Molly/Sev a lot. Much more fitting than the Hermione/Sev pair. And I liked that the only girl who isn

Ch 15 - tartan nightgown - that was cute, but the emerald knickers were funny! Leave it to two Slytherins to give her knickers in Slytherin green. Nice song for Severus; I\'m guessing the bets on his kids are evenly spread, some betting he\'ll have only one or two, the rest betting on Molly\'s history of fertility. Poor Severus, having to fetch a wedding dress for his Slytherin student at that time of night, even though she\'s only been in his house a short while. Funny to think of Fudge shaking Lupin\'s werewolf paw. So Severus doesn\'t mind having Lupin as a brother-in-law, eh? Now just keep Hermione below Lucius\' and Percy\'s radar, please... Thanks for the new chapter!!

Dude that was sweet, how did you come up with that? More please!

Aww this story is so cute! I love the Severus and Molly pairing, its not everyday that you see that but their cute. And i love your both your Severus and your Lucius, their both a little OOC but terribly funny. Great work! Cant wait to see more.

- Jessica