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Holy shitnit, that was, depressing. . .but it did help get the story along I hope!

Ch 19 - omigosh, Severus goes from bachelor to super-Dad and Grandfather so quickly! He seems to be doing well with the adjustment. Now a French daughter.... \"She followed me home, can I keep her?\" - too cute! Thanks for keeping Hermione under the Lucius-radar.

June - Hermione\'s dad hitting the floor was the thump she heard on her way down the stairs.
Shacklebolt brought Hermione into admitting as Lucius brought Molly. No, Lucius isn\'t the killer.


Everyone - hope this and the next chapter clears a few things up - i\'m not too good at cliffhangers yet.

Ch 21 - okay, so Lucius is seeking to marry Rosmerta, whose other choice is who? (Sorry, I can\'t remember!) Both of Hermione\'s parents were killed, but while I\'m happy Hermione is alive, I still don\'t understand why the killer didn\'t just kill Hermione outright. Also not sure why the killer went after the Grangers and Molly. Lucius had an idea what caused the curse on Hermione, or is it something else he has an idea about? As for Severus having a niece - does that pink result mean that Hermione is now genetically blood bonded to him as a niece? She\'s not pregnant, right? Thank you for updating so quickly; it really helps me to remember the story details.

Wonderfull story. I just love it. Can\'t wait till the next chapter is up. Professor Snape is my favorite caracter and matched with Molly weasley is quite refreshing.

Oh I love that, She fallowed me home, can I keep her! Oh dude ROTFL so hard! I loved it can\'t wait for more!

The Christmas dinner scene was so sweet it\'s giving me cavities. Are you may be setting up a Harry/Gabrielle pairing? You\'ve made Gabrielle older than canon but I presume a similar event with the merman still occurred and that she still has a bad case of hero worship. If that is the case, I see a problem and I also have a related pet peeve. The problem is that Gabrielle still doesn\'t actually know Harry as a person. Other than whatever Fleur has told her, Gabrielle has little knowledge of Harry beyond what is generally known about him and Harry probably knows little about her other than that she\'s Fleur\'s sister. I don\'t see that Harry and Gabrielle would necessarily be compatible. Also, you\'ve stated that Harry wants a woman who likes him for himself, who would like him even if he wasn\'t THE Harry Potter. Given Ron\'s reaction to Fleur in GoF, maybe you\'re setting up a Ron/Gabrielle pairing. That would be unusual, but you\'ve shown that you can make the unusual fairly plausible.
My pet peeve is all the Harry/X stories where X is pregnant by someone else but St. Harry saves the day, expresses his love for her, and they live happily ever after. If he loved X and she had been raped (Does the wizarding world have a morning after potion? One wouldn\'t think so from HP fanfiction.) I think he would support her decision whether abortion, adoption, or keeping the child and would marry her regardless. But why does Harry always forgive or overlook when the child is from consensual sex with some other man? I find this behavior particularly irritating in more than a few Harry/Ginny stories where Harry is treated like a spare tire, to be used only in case of emergency. It\'s certainly no flaw in his character if, like many if not most men, he generally restricts his romantic interests to women who aren\'t pregnant.

I\'m enjoying your christmas scene very much. Snape having fun doing family things he never got to do is great! I don\'t mean to be rude, but what about the rest of the gang? And Harry\'s girl? You left her beaten and possibly sterile, but despite time moving forward, we don\'t know anything else?!?! Please don\'t keep us in suspense!

AWWWWWWWW so sugery! I like it and well the name was not so bad. I like the way it was done truly I do!

Ch 18 - nice dinner! What, no chocolate for dessert? Maybe next chapter? Poor Gabrielle, not even getting her sister\'s letters all this time and getting disowned from her family. Did Molly make herself a sweater? Thanks for updating!