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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 24 - I like the letters to Molly - they\'re funny. Poor Draco! So Lucius\' father-in-law will be the Minister of Magic - nice for him. And Severus has to go shopping again; no wonder he\'s so busy. Thank you for updating! I got a little concerned when a few days went by without a new chapter. Looking forward to Part 2.
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 23 - So Rosmerta picked Fudge over Lucius - a big move up for a barkeeper to marry the Minister of Magic. So no one wants Lucius yet, eh... I agree that Severus would have good taste in clothing - he seems to have a very exacting eye for details, so I think he\'d notice things like fabric quality and texture, etc. Hermione as daughter of Snape\'s sister - you mean the same sister who married Lupin? Or another sister? Why did her real grandfather want to kill Hermione and her parents? Nice to see Molly explaining to Hermione about the sweaters and Easter egg. Thanks for the new chapter!!
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are an awesome author, i heart you
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWW that story was good, full of Halmark moments but good. I liked the enddeing, it was sugery but realistic, more please!
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 22 - thanks for finding Hermione! So she\'s now Severus\' niece because of the spell, which means his parents are now her grandparents? Did the aurors find who killed the Grangers and attacked Molly? Thanks for updating!
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hermione is Sev\'s niece by blood - she\'s his sister\'s child. The healer simply did a modified paternity test, showing he was a relative on the maternal side.
The murderer was Hermione\'s real Grandfather, who is now dead due to being shot with an Avada Kadavra by both Lucius and Harry...
The murderer was Hermione\'s real Grandfather, who is now dead due to being shot with an Avada Kadavra by both Lucius and Harry...
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
***stomps foot---sticks out lip and pouts*** where\'s the rest of the story??? ***grin*** MORE, PLEASE!!!!!!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ack write more to this story! i got so drawn into it i had to finish it!!!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was way cool and SWEET! Severus \'s family just gets bigger and bigger, can\'t wait for more
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 20 - well, I sure hope you update soon, as I am unclear about this chapter. Hermione\'s father was elsewhere? The killer didn\'t kill Hermione instantly but killed her mother - why? Why not kill Hermione too? Lucius and Harry shot hexes at the person who tried to hex Molly (the body on the floor) - is this the same person who killed Jane Granger? What was Lucius doing at the Snape house, and why didn\'t the Snape wards work against the intruder? How did Lucius know that Hermione was injured - is Lucius the killer who is trying to look like a hero? I\'m wary about this Lucius...