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Wait, I\'m confused. What does Severus\' stepmother have anything to do with this? How did Hermione find out that she was adopted in the first place, did the Grangers tell her? Did Evan and Felicity know that their child was still alive? *groans* Please explain, because I\'m really confused.

Ch 24 - it looks like you\'ve rewritten this chapter. Boy, those family relationships are confusing - I could use a family tree chart to try to understand them. Talk about inbreeding! My head is spinning....

That was a bit short but I liked the story line and such, when do we see the cute babbies?

Ch 25-26 - ah, now I see! Ch25 was the old Ch24 by accident. Okay, so I really do wish I had a family tree chart, but I don\'t, so I\'ll have to depend on you to keep track of who is whose relative. I think it\'s extremely realistic to show that everyone is still adjusting to their new relationships, something that may take months if not years. Well, maybe the Lupin family might adjust faster, since the kids are young. Thanks for updating!! Oh, and what will happen between the Branstones and Hermione now? Still not sure why Evan\'s father killed Hermione\'s adoptive parents - none of it was their fault.

*ugh* write faster!! =)

I really love the Molly/Severus aspect. Molly as something other than a one-dimensional character is enchanting and you\'ve also given a great spin on why she is often shown as being utterly overbearing, with her many control issues. The way that you put Severus across is one of the most humanised versions of him that I\'ve read. It\'s very nice to read a Snape that isn\'t untouchable or so caught up in his own angst and selfishness that he lacks awareness of others. I always read him as someone that was quite aware, if harried.

The way you blend the characters and their personalities and situations together makes it uneccesary for the reader to fill in gaps that many authors leave behind. I can\'t wait for the next update. I\'m also hoping for more Severus/Molly from you as barely anyone writes it.

-Imp

I ADORE this story... its a nice mix of the characters... and an interesting take on the Weasely\'s relationship... good job over all... can\'t wait for the next part

This is a wonderful story. Yeah, Snape is OOC, but don\'t ya just love him that way?

Halaula! MAn this chapter was great, do by all means contiue to keep it up. Oh side quetsain, who gets hooked up with Hermionie?

I don\'t usually review many of the stories I read, but I just had to say that I really enjoy your story. It is definetly one that we don\'t usually read. Keep up the great writing, can\'t wait to see what happens. One question, is Hermione going to fall under the new law soon, it would seem like she would be one of the first people to. ~Adelee~