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for Marriage Law Madness

by wjctheatrechick

person Ali
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. More original than most of the MLC's out there. can't wait to see what's next.
person Eiri Yuki
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that wasn't the end! I love it so far, though I was shocked by the pairing. Who would've guessed that those two could go together in that setting? Update soon!

Eiri
person Darque Hart
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First off - FINISH THIS! Other than that, the only complaints I have with your story is that you rushed through a lot of it. You should go through your chapters and fill in the skimmed over gaps. That plus this is SOOOOOO out of character for nearly everyone portrayed ... but that is unimportant in a 'marriage law' story. It's worth finishing or I wouldn't be typing here that it was.
person Morgan LeFay
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still waiting for more chapters....... *sigh*
person wjctheatrechick
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Since there was no e-mail, I\'m answering your questions here. \"Wow, quiete an unusual pairing Molly/ Snape. I never thought this pairing would work well, but it is actually great. I love it. I really love stories with Snape. And having so many kids to take care of is great. But there are a few things I liked to know. How come Hermoine is living/adopted by Snape/Molly instead of living with her real parents Snape\'s sister/Remus or that Branstone guy?\"

At the time Hermione almost died and they bound her to Severus, they didn\'t know yet who Hermione\'s real parents were. She needs to stay close to Severus for awhile, as until she fully recovers (which can take awhile with a injury like she had, muscle damage from cruciatus, etc) she can feed off his magic if she needs to. She\'s also not with Felicity and Remus because they have their hands full with their two (look for a surprise in store for them a few chapters from now) She doens\'t know her dad well at all, will have a few evenings out to get to know him in upcoming chapters. Plus, Hermione\'s stepmom is still getting used to the idea - she\'ll probably spend part of the next holidays with them.
And how did she find out she was adopted?

Her parents had to tell her, as she needed her real birth certificate to get an apparition licence - you cannot fake wizarding papers, they would have told her at the ministry that she needed her magical papers - which of course she had no idea existed.

Is Harry already adopted by Molly/Snape?
Yes.

If not were is he actually living as the Dursleys are dead? Does Severus know that Molly and Arthur were going to adopt Harry and how will he react?

He is at Hogwarts, will go to Snape Manor for some of summer vacation.
Please update soon!
person Mel
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, quiete an unusual pairing Molly/ Snape. I never thought this pairing would work well, but it is actually great. I love it. I really love stories with Snape. And having so many kids to take care of is great. But there are a few things I liked to know. How come Hermoine is living/adopted by Snape/Molly instead of living with her real parents Snape\'s sister/Remus or that Branstone guy? And how did she find out she was adopted? Is Harry already adopted by Molly/Snape? If not were is he actually living as the Dursleys are dead? Does Severus know that Molly and Arthur were going to adopt Harry and how will he react?
Please update soon!
person cjd
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww...
It was quite nice to log on and fing such a sweet update.
person JJ
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on solving your plot problem! I really enjoy this story. What an inspiration to pull in Dumbledore and Minerva. I thought you\'d pull in Herm. and Harry. Even thinking the solution up was brilliant. Thanks for writing.
person Morgan Le Fay
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yippee!!! 2 more chapters--keep up the great writing! Please!!
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who is the father to Hermione and Pansy\'s child? Did I miss that? It was a bit confusing at times. Draco might become a single parent. Poor thing. I normally only read slash but this caught my attention.