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for Marriage Law Madness

by wjctheatrechick

person sbkar
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ginny and Draco? Hmmm... Who\'s Hermione\'s one and only???
person sbkar
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Molly Weasley and Severus Snape!!! ROFLMAO so hard, I can\'t breathe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person sbkar
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Snape kissing in public????!?!?!?!??! That\'s..... That\'s... wow... I can\'t even tell you what that is! Really!!!!!!!!!!!!
person sbkar
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Snape is just tooooo accommodating, don\'t you think? And, actually too young... But, it is your story... thus, continue....
person JJ
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How sweet! Lots of story, no angst. I love that Molly and Snape are working out, but what about Hermoinie and Harry and all the rest? I bet things aren\'t going so smoothly with them! How about some funny stories about some of the other couples? I\'m not complaining - I\'m enjoying your story and want some more!! I love it that Dumbledore is having trouble following through. I\'d love to see how they handle babies. I bet Molly\'s class would include some advice to new wives on how to handle husband problems! Who ended up with Ron? Will marriage settle Neville down?
person Kelley\'s Sweetpea
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I love the Severus/Molly couple. Very different, but it works. I love this story. I know Severus is a little OOC, but all people are different with thier husband or wife. He would treat a wife different
person Kelley\'s Sweetpea
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very few stories have Kingsley Shacklebolt, maybe he would make a good match for Hermione. Very little is known about him, so lots of room to explore. Just a thought
person June
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 8 - perfect! Felicity and Lupin - a ready-made family, fertility unimportant. I hope Molly feels better now and up to her \"real\" wedding night. Very cute about Minerva and her tartan nightgowns! Oh, about that proposal for Harry from the father of his student - is that a valid proposal? THANK YOU for finding someone else for Lupin!!!!
person June
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 - yay, they\'re in love! BTW, her name is Molly SNAPE now - no more Molly Weasley. Or make it Molly Weasley Snape. [PS - please match Hermione with someone intelligent, perhaps a Ravenclaw, or an auror like Shacklebolt, or an original character. NOT LUPIN!!!]
person ?
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
could you put hermione with lupin please?