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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, this just gets better and better. PLease on with the fic and it is getting really great.
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m having lots of fun with your story. The chapters are short with more diologue then descritpion of peoples actions and thoughts to fill them out, but the action is fast paced and the story is great! What about Hermoinie? Is she married/expecting? I couldn\'t tell. And what about Harry and Ron? Why did your story need all those girls? Although the part about the sabotagued potion was great because now everyone will be having babies! Happy, happy, joy, joy! Let the hilarity commence!
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHHHHH that was so sweet! I love this chapter espeshly finding Snape\'s sister . . .could you go further? YOu know possably put the whole thing up? I love this stroy or better yet if you have the whole thing written up e-mail it to me and I can give you a legthy reveiw! I need more though please?!!!!!!!!!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, can we get more? I do enjoy were your going with that. Its so nice not to have two tons of garbage to read threw before one gets to the good stuff.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 9 - nice fight! Looks like it\'s time to get Molly\'s stuff from the pawnshop. I guess she has been under a lot of stress and needed that \"relief.\" Bad Molly, she should\'ve covered up her husband\'s bruise before Albus saw it! I\'m looking forward to seeing what happens on their trip to Diagon Alley, and Harry and Lupin\'s visit to Hogsmeade. THANK YOU for updating so quickly!!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesing and detailed story. I like your pairings so far.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 10 - whoa, this is really \"madness\" alright!! Molly and Arthur - and now Molly and Severus - wanting to adopt Harry ... wonder what will happen when Molly tells Severus! Biggest shock in this chapter - \"The thought of Filch and the former Mistress Umbridge procreating made him ill.\" Yikes! Makes sense, though - the way Filch idolized Umbridge in Book 5; I think she\'d insist on getting him a job elsewhere, far away from those centaurs. Severus as Lupin\'s brother-in-law - you\'ve really got it in for poor Severus in this story! You make him the father of all Weasleys and soon Harry, and then related to Lupin - he\'s going to be in shock! Maybe Severus should get one of those spa days like Molly and Minerva had. Looking forward to the next chapter already!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, I really liked how you wrote Snape, he\'s still snarky, but there\'s something else there too. I thought he was very believable, although I can\'t wait to find out who Ron, Hermione, and Harry end up with. Will Hermione be with Percy, I noticed he escorted her during the wedding?
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! The evolving relationships are so funny and interesting! Who would have thought that Snape would have so much muggle stuff? And the way you slipped Lupin in was so sweet! This is not a flame, and I understand you want spanking in your story, but couldn\'t Snape have left his students underware on? I feel you pushed that way too far, at least for my comfort. I really want to keep reading your stories!!!
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At 5 o\'clock in the morning, I needed a laugh and this chapter gave it to me... Unvarnished and quick!!! Sooooooo goooood!!!!