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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im sorry, but that was just wrong, even if i read it out of morbid curiosity anyways...
troll sex...[shiver]
troll sex...[shiver]
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK.
1. People telling her that one night (or day) of wild sex with a mountain troll was unacceptable. <---- Who the FUCK would ever tell her that? People? What people?! I sure as fuck do not remeber anyone ever telling Hermoine this. Though it was a bit funny to put it into your story.
2. Your chapters made no sense. Why did they end where they did? Why!?! I want answers here!
3. Hermoine is, like, 11 or 12 here. Girls that young would NOT be able to handle a 10 inch dick inside them, and I really think that a little girl like that would want to loose her virginity to somebody special...cuz she IS just a little girl.
4. It was Out Of Character. VERY Out Of Character.
And that's it for me. Oh wait...one last thing
5. It was FUNNY as fucking HELL!!! Hahahaha!!!
Cheers
1. People telling her that one night (or day) of wild sex with a mountain troll was unacceptable. <---- Who the FUCK would ever tell her that? People? What people?! I sure as fuck do not remeber anyone ever telling Hermoine this. Though it was a bit funny to put it into your story.
2. Your chapters made no sense. Why did they end where they did? Why!?! I want answers here!
3. Hermoine is, like, 11 or 12 here. Girls that young would NOT be able to handle a 10 inch dick inside them, and I really think that a little girl like that would want to loose her virginity to somebody special...cuz she IS just a little girl.
4. It was Out Of Character. VERY Out Of Character.
And that's it for me. Oh wait...one last thing
5. It was FUNNY as fucking HELL!!! Hahahaha!!!
Cheers
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! It\'s the troll story! Heh, I totally helped write chapter one... the only non-pr0n part of it... hehehe
~Josma
~Josma
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that really sucked.