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by Kabalysa

person Marchatorium
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:) It\'s quite good. ^^
I expected a lot of smut but it is very good though.
person Irene
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate Tonks and Charlie\'s character. The story has gone down hill since you added Tonks character. Don\'t like it.
person JJ
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far, so good. In your story you are starting off with Snape\'s cover blown. That\'s a new angle from my point of view. I like how you let Dumbledore show himself to be an intense and powerful wizard. Most writers won\'t. So Snape liked his relationship with Lucious. What will he do to replace it? I\'m looking forward to more. Thanks!