AFF Fiction Portal
person Anon
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP!!!
ASOTA
person StapleKitten
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Muhahahahahaha HA! OMG I like so loved! I always go around looking for fics like this and you just like made my day! You\'re a good writer. But try to show more emotion with the characters. Get the reader to either be getting off with Snape or crying their eyes out with Potter.
person Satan Blitzkreig
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man you have to continue this story!
That chapter was KICK ASS!
person yana
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very strong beginning.
I like your writing style
please continue
person Akume
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was some introduction. I can\'t wait for the follow-up.