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for Indago

by lojenn

person DuckEyedFool
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please let the baby be lost i hate mpreg stories and your story is one of the best i\'ve read in a long time. please please please let him lose the baby. your story is excellent by the way, sorry if the above sounds slightly sick.
person Mastin
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic twist! This story just keeps getting better and better!

Did Harry lose the baby? I\'d rather prefer that myself, because I\'m no fan of m-preg, plus it would create so many issues between Harry and Draco, but I\'ll still read if he hasn\'t. This is such a great story.

Hmm... Snape\'s nearby? I\'m so tantalized by the issues you\'ve created between Draco and Snape. I\'ll be interested to see what you do from here!
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
I have one question though, when you write Cravenclaw, is that what you want it to say, or do you mean Ravenclaw? Because you\'ve used the word a few times within the last few chapters...
More soon?
person Feli
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wel...... Correct me if I\'m wrong, but it sounds to me like Harry is nesting. Was it really fifteen hours that passed after he took the contraceptive? Maybe Lustrum started a touch too early for Harry... I\'m eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!!
person Closet Skeleton
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry is NESTING! I love it! Mwa ha!

Definently loving this current theme. Though isn\'t Draco going to smell Snape\'s scent on Harry because of the scarf and go nuts? Hmm.
person Alex
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Excellent chapter! Can\'t wait for more!
person kkpixie
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Buwahahahaha! Poor Harry. He doesn\'t realize that being pregnant and being crazy are almost one and the same *cackle*

How??? I heart biology.
person Sophie
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON!!! WHAT HAPPENED TO THE BABY? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
person Softwillow1687
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yeah, I am so part of that mob. Why coulden\'t you know, at least make it long. Please please hurry back, enjoy your trip, but hurry back and finish the chapter.

Is this story gonna have a sequel?
person foxfire
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"nnoooooooooooooooooooooo!! your so cruel!! *crys* and your gonna be away for three days!! *sob*.....*breaths* \"sniff, iv been reading your up dates like mad, and i was suprised when you update so fast!! i was like yay! her stories fantastic! and she up dates fast!! i was so happy,.. now i have to wait!! *sobs* \"but i ,..i think,..i can get through this!! yes i can!!! *makes some hot coco, sits in a corner and waits for you to come back* \"have a good time in las vagas!!\"