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by lojenn

person canis_major
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story. Can\'t wait until the next chapters.
person Anon
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First, I hope you have a great time in Vegas. While you did leave the readers with rather an upsetting cliffie, there is no need to apologize: you update more frequently than any other fan fic writer; you deserve to take a break.
Now about that idiot Draco-- it\'s getting hard for me to want him and Harry together when he acts like an overreacting, uninformed jerk, a powerful, dangerous overreacting jerk. Will the Ministry be on his case? Judging by what you wrote, surely he hurt Hermione and Ron as well as breaking at least one of Harry\'s arms, not to mention probably causing Harry to miscarry. I would think Draco\'s horrible destructive behaviour, based merely on misunderstood overheard conversations, should be grounds for the Ministry to get involved, if not for Harry\'s sake then for the other innocents around Draco. I wouldn\'t feel too bad if Draco got punished by the Ministry( or Snape); he\'s come around a bit but not nearly enough. Also, if Harry loses the baby will he be able to forgive Draco? And where is Snape in all this? Won\'t he want to protect Harry, as a rare subicio?
Anyway thank you and I can\'t wait till Thursday!
person Anon
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg I cant believe that last chapter. I hope harry and the baby will be alright. I hate the mean draco bring back the nice and sweet draco. You are a very good writer. keep up the good work
person Mistress_D
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, how dare you stop on such a cliff-hanger?!?! XO But really, I love this story. ^^ Particularly chapter 35. Or 34, depending on how you look at it. Very hot. And I love that little Quidditch chant Harry does. Very creative. ^^ I am now offically hooked on this story, and I shall continue checking for new installments every day. XD Keep it up!! *thumbs up*
person Harial
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you do not update VERY soon I will hunt you down and beat you...

btw I love your fic

Harial
person Slave4severus
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:;:::blink::; NO!!! Don\'t end the chapter now!!!!!!!!!!!!! I need more!! You are to sit at your computer and write, write, write!!! I command you, darn it!! OHHH PLEASE LET THE CHILD BE SNAPE\'S!!!!!! What a great turn of events!! Not the breaking of bones and hitting Hermione of course, but great none the less. Please, update soon, I know you always do, but put a rush on this one, ok??? vknickens@netzero.com
person Laura
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH. MY. GOD. I cannot believe you just did that and then took a bloody vacation.... AAARRRGGGHHH!
person Wildfire
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person Reader
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good story. This last chapter is great - I can\'t wait for next! So exciting, and I sought - what else could happen...a lot could happen! Thanks!
person Dezra
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re right, I hate this chapter, but it\'s exactly how I\'d expect Draco to react to overhearing what he thought was Harry leaving him. Please update soon.