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for Indago

by lojenn

person thrnbrooke
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Poor Harry! What will he do now? Can\'t wait for chapter 45!
person WretchedScar
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read your ENTIRE freaking story again. Are you freaking home yet?
This is turning me into some insane internet story stalker. Grrrrrrrr.
I have a life you know - I just need an update! Is that ASKING so bleepin much!!

::Folds arms, sits by link, waits for update::

Are you home yet?

Bah.
person kelly
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good lord-you are turning me into a regular reviewer! How can Snape turn his back on a pregnant woman...err boy. It could be his! The angst isn\'t over yet. What a prick. I hope Draco feels bad too when he wakes up. What a prick. Did I say that already? Well who care-they\'re both pricks. By the way--Still loving the story and welcome back.
person MOI
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Y\'know, what Snape said was terribly cruel, and any nicer person would have replied
\"yeah, sure, I\'ll help,\" but I\'m incredibly glad that Hermione\' plan didn\'t work! Because
Harry has to hang around Draco, and I\'m holding out for my happy ending. I\'m glad
you had a nice trip, and I\'m just as glad that you can write more. Oh, be still my heart,
we need no longer fear the cliffhanger... for a few more chapters, I pray.
person Death in a Pink Boa
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harsh. Poor Harry.
person Mastin
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist with Snape there! I hope Draco does order Harry to get rid of the baby, maybe think it\'s Snape\'s. It would create real problems between Harry and Draco. And maybe Snape would feel guilty, refusing to protect Harry.

I\'d like it if Snape protected Harry, but I like it also that he refuses. It\'s much more like *Snape* to simply not care one way or another what happens to Harry.

But please, please let the baby go away. Nothing ruins a fantastic fic mroe than a male pregnancy
person Queen mAlice
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the most amazing, most primal, most HARSH stories I have ever read.

Thank you for not having snape give in. He is wise in his disisions, though Harry is right as well.

Your with eternal gratitude for your amazing work,
Joy mAlice
person buonissima
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m impressed. You\'ve taken the oftused plotline of magical creatures and mates and slowly turned it into something deeper and more interesting. In the beginning it seemed just like a well-written excuse for s/m pwp, but it\'s not. I very much enjoy your Snape and the way Harry really is partly an animal, a creature, who has to live a double-life, both as a human like his friends expect him to be and as a beast. This chapter was very interesting, as I started to suspect whether all Harry\'s submission is just caused by his race. Maybe being an indago also gives him an excuse to be weak? I have it difficult in deciding whether I agree - or disagree - more with Snape or with Harry....Thank you. I\'m waiting for continuation, hopefully full of problematic levels. I hope you\'ll keep your Snape as a counterforce in this story as I think he functions very well as such.
person dido
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, so so disappointed in Snape. Harry is so screwed, figuratively and literally. I\'m sorry I just don\'t see how you are going to make Draco sympathetic now. Well, not without some serious remorse that lasts more than a day. The only thing that gave me hope in the chapter was Snape\'s comment about Griffindor winning the fight. Does Harry have more power in the relationship than he knows? Or was Snape just playing games.
Thanks again.
person fraser
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that almost wants to make me cry, ALMOST, i can\'t wait for the next chapter