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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't even looking for Harry/Draco today but somehow I stumbled upon this gem. I read it straight through, in one sitting. I think I've been at my computer for much too long. I loved it and will be starting the sequel sometime soon (I will try to pace myself with that, as it is still a WIP).
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really fantastic story! It is great from the first word on until the last one. I loved reading this fiction and look forward to the Sequel,
tinkita
tinkita
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! I spent a few days reading it straight through, skipping classes and cutting my sleep - if that's any indication for you of how good this story really is.
You had everything in it! Character development without becoming too OOC (Snape and Draco being their snarky selves *adores*), suspense, love, friendship (Ron is the king!!) and hot sex. *squee*
I'm so glad the sequel is written already!
Thank you for so much pleasure!!!
You had everything in it! Character development without becoming too OOC (Snape and Draco being their snarky selves *adores*), suspense, love, friendship (Ron is the king!!) and hot sex. *squee*
I'm so glad the sequel is written already!
Thank you for so much pleasure!!!
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOHHH WOW!!! I have to say this IS one of the best stories I've ever read! It was really good. I do admit I was a bit skeptical at first and hermione was starting to piss me of at the end, but, It was sooo good. Now I'm off to read the sequel! -Clover- and >.< weston ~No Day But Today~
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God, that made me cry so hard. You write with such passion, and such truth, it\'s amazing. I\'m /still/ crying.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do believe this is the best story that I have had the good fortune of finding. I enjoyed both your plot and your writing style. This story kept me on the edge of my seat the whole way through. I offer you my blessings in your future as an author, although I doubt you\'ll need them.
Sincerely,
Asphodel
Sincerely,
Asphodel
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautiful story!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! your fic makes my h/d fic look like something scraped off the bottom of my shoe, lol. (I have a weird compulsion to go back and start spell checking all my stuff now... actually I think I will)
but seriously that was absolutely the most brilliant fic I have read. Amazing characterisation, you kept them apart and distinctive in their reaction to circumstances presented to them and factored in that Malfoy pride incredibly well too.
When things started to go missing the first time, I thought it was draco building Harry a nest to dwell in, i was so surprised when it turned out to be Harry himself, because you didn\'t let anything on that it was him, which is awesome because there\'s never anything worse than spelt out for you. and the second time things went missing I started to think that it would be draco this time trying to rebuild the den to entice Harry back, but then there was that brilliant little twist in there with the werewolves to blame.
I swear that ending almost gave me a heart attack, i was going, okay he\'s going to live we all know he\'s going to live. i was actually beginning to wonder if he was going to give birth right then when he felt the pains. I keep imagining the med-witch kinda standing by the bed staring at Harry with a scalpel poised over his belly going \'now as soon as you feel any pain what so ever we\'re going to try to cut it out\' (you know emergency c-section) but anyway when I was reading the last chapter, i had this moment thinking, okay Harry
but seriously that was absolutely the most brilliant fic I have read. Amazing characterisation, you kept them apart and distinctive in their reaction to circumstances presented to them and factored in that Malfoy pride incredibly well too.
When things started to go missing the first time, I thought it was draco building Harry a nest to dwell in, i was so surprised when it turned out to be Harry himself, because you didn\'t let anything on that it was him, which is awesome because there\'s never anything worse than spelt out for you. and the second time things went missing I started to think that it would be draco this time trying to rebuild the den to entice Harry back, but then there was that brilliant little twist in there with the werewolves to blame.
I swear that ending almost gave me a heart attack, i was going, okay he\'s going to live we all know he\'s going to live. i was actually beginning to wonder if he was going to give birth right then when he felt the pains. I keep imagining the med-witch kinda standing by the bed staring at Harry with a scalpel poised over his belly going \'now as soon as you feel any pain what so ever we\'re going to try to cut it out\' (you know emergency c-section) but anyway when I was reading the last chapter, i had this moment thinking, okay Harry
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your story a lot. It is far more interesting than any other fanfic which I have read of late. I do have one small quibble though and that is \"drug\". The correct word is \"dragged\", never \"drug\". I hope this is helpful as it mars an otherwise fascinating story.
Best wishes,
Akinaria (English teacher!)
Best wishes,
Akinaria (English teacher!)