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for Indago

by lojenn

person Reader
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! I am wondering what Has Draco in his mind...
person Missi
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please! I so want to like Snape, too! Maybe Draco will stop being such an ass instead?
person twisteds_mini
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry, but I can\'t complain. You are keeping Snape incredibly well in character. *golf clap* But I do hope he warms up to Harry some...

Btw, it is totally your fault that I messed up two people\'s orders- I couldn\'t get this fic out of my head!! =^^=;;
person Neqs
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! It\'s not easy being him, but when has it been. Maybe it\'s just my optimistic nature (or my faith in you) but I can\'t help but feel a bit hopeful. Snape will come off the potion and who knows what the hormones will do when he\'s near a breeding sub? Also, Draco\'s confrontation of Lucius gives me hope that he\'s becoming a bit more mature/responsible. Sorry if I keep yammering on about the plot instead of giving fb on your writing style, etc, but you just write so well! The story just sucks me in. I\'m hopelessly hooked. I check for updates about 20 times a day, seriously. So I\'m very redundant when I say that I\'m looking forward to the next chapter!
person SilverPhoenix
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, i forgot that the baby could be Serverus\' as well...great chapter, a lil smalll but no wrorries :) hope you uipdate soon
person Sydney
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don\'t it Snape\'s baby...I don\'t think I could bear it. I am glad that Snape has decided to not have any kind of relationship with Harry-sexual or otherwise. I know what Draco did was awful, but I still feel bad for him. He and Harry were happy together for a while-if only he had stopped to think. Please say they will be together again. Maybe the baby will have silver grey eyes? Or blond hair green eyes. Or maybe red hair...haha, that would shock everyone! Or maybe, just maybe, Harry will make a firm decision for himself without the influence of anyone including his friends...whatever that decison may be.
person TeeDee
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry. It\'s a sin how everything just keeps getting worse for him! Hopefully things can be mended between he and Draco and built between he and Snape.
person Wildfire
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well at least Draco\'s growing up a little, SNAPE BETTER CHILL THE HELL OUT! NONE of this is Harry\'s fault! why do I have a feeeling Snapes going to upset Harry soon... and when do the werewolves come in?

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person chantalmalfoy
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not sure what to think about Draco in that chapter... And Snape... ugh. I still want to smack him upside his head.
person Frikin Carefree
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Harry is alive!!!! He broken like a china doll but alive. Awe poor draco didn\'t know anything and got his sub taken away because he was playing to rough. One question Who\'s baby is it? Snape or Draco\'s? I hope its Draco\'s Snape is to old. OH NO Harry must live with the old sup! Does he really believe that would be better than living with draco I mean Draco know he Was wrond and a bad boy he\'ll be better. Thank you for the extra chapter you didn\'t have to as long as Harry was alive i\'m sure all of us would of been content. I\'m glad you had so much fun in Nevada.