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for Indago

by lojenn

person MOI
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Draco\'s feeling remorseful! Encore!
person look at my ding-a-ling-ling
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! YOU HAVE OVER 1200 REVIEWS!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!SEE HOW POPULAR YOU ARE? WOW! no wonder, your story is great!!! not only is it good plot wise but it also has great grammar and syntax. keep up the excellent job! Most other authors have 1200 hits! you have 1200 REVIEWS AND WHO KNOWS HOW MANY HITS!!!
CONGRATULATIONS AND UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a mess! I can\'t wait for chapter 47! Draco stood up to Lucius. Is he not Indago? Who\'s child is it? That\'s the question. Draco just left it at that. No fighting, no talking. Nothing.
person Rebecca
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where\'s today\'s update?!
person look at my ding-a-ling-ling
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dont get me wrong girl, I love you; but honey, I live in the east coast! I go to sleep 3 hours earlier than you do! so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! :(
person look at my ding-a-ling-ling
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I totally agree with dominic shade! Please do all those things: especially the tummy rubbing/purring part...I think that adorable!!!
Eagerly waiting for the next chappie!!
UPDATE SOON! LUVS TO ALL!
person dido
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Dominic Shade as well. You did imply that Harry would have some sort of power or free will against the Superios and I would like to see it. Right now he still seems pretty powerless. Also Snape is very judgemental with Harry (ok fits with canon but). Harry has only known a few months what he is and he is the weaker physically and seemingly psychologically. Yet Snape, who has known of his own condition all his life, could not resist having sex with Harry, even though Harry was obviously there under duress. So Snape has some nerve to accuse Harry of acting like a child!
person Alexa
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that I agree with Domonic Shade - he has some great points.
Snape\'s instincts would have to make him fawn over Harry. And a pregnant person should get affection and contact on a regular basis.
I really wonder where Harry will set up his next nest and where he will get the material from - he already used all most of what the other students had.
He could, of course, just mail order some things - he does have his own money.
OH, and by the way, when Harry thought about picking up knitting, I think it might make sence. I know it was half-joke but he would be able to bissy himself when he is stuck in his room - which Snape said he will be, and he could work the stress out, and as far as instincts go - even human pregnant women \"nest\", and it goes beyond just making a soft denn. They do stuff for the baby, knit, etc. Harry could start buying things for the child. He would probably want to.
And that would be a perfect opportunity for Draco to suck up - buy the baby some presents.
Again, LOVE the story!
person Yana
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG poor Harry
why is everyone mean to him
person Eowynselixure
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I can definately see this swinging back in the direction of Harry/Draco! Oh Please! Draco was really sweet letting Harry have his own way, he so loves Harry!!!

Yes I know your the writer and you decide what goes on but its ME now. Bow down and so my bidding!!!

HaHaHaHaHaHaHa- (Evil laugh)

Hm moving on PLEASE, PLEASE,PLEASE Carry on what you started, Draco is in love! Harry is in love! GET THEM BACK TOGEATHER!!!

But not to soon ay ;)

BUT SOON ENOUGH

lol I\'m leaving now

*Eowyns elixure