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Is Haary going to be attacked by werewolves???????

i want draco back!
i miss him T_T

i love your style
i love the story
and i love the cherecters
they all -real-!

so waiting for the next chepter
and please
quiker and longer!

This fic has been my guilty pleasure for the last couple of weeks - one of the reason for which being that I didn\'t feedback, *slaps own hand*.

Generally I really love what you\'re doing with the plot and the characters - most of the time you have me grinning with delight :o) !

Two things I\'ll say, though:

The fic could really use a good beta to catch all the little errors here and there. They are annoying and unnecessarily marr the story. (If you decide to look for one: make sure they know what they\'re doing - asking for references is legit! - don\'t just pick anyone who sees it as a chance to get the chapters before everyone else!!)

You don\'t owe your readers anything - we\'re getting all this for free!! Please don\'t fret about being late or not updating every freaking day - there\'s no way you\'re going to be able to keep it up, anyways, and we\'d all rather you eventually finish the story than write yourself into a corner/be come fed-up with it, leaving it unfinished. In case you didn\'t hear me: YOU DON\'T OWE ANYONE ANYTHING IN REGARDS TO THIS FIC - TAKE YOUR TIME :o)

Oh no poor Harry! See I told you being away from Draco was bad for him and Hermione\'s so got it ALL wrong!!!

I just thought of a way for you to introduce the purring thing on Harry\'s part. I think it\'d be funny if Ron just gave Harry\'s belly a friendly rub, then Harry starts his purring. You could just make that into a funny situation of Harry making Ron rub his belly again. And this can happen during their potions class, so when he starts to purr, Draco and Snape hear it and instantly wilt at the sound, Draco shouldn\'t be able to shake off this feeling very much, but Snape should since he\'s older. And I\'m serious about that random lady with Snape, you just don\'t need her hon, it just feels like extra baggage for the fict. Okay, now I wanna change my guess...are you basing the Indago on Hyenas?


Good times and rock on,

Dom

i feel soo sorry for Harry
how can people do that

How beautiful! Poor draco though i hope in the end he gets his lover back!
Snape is just to cold for harry! all well every thing will be great no matter what
hey maby snape might have a change in heart and will in the end
want the babys to be his so he can care for them and nuture them!
any ways al ways checking for updates1 but dont feal rushed i would rather
wait for something incredible! God i love every last chapter!
You are a awsome writer!

Hey Iam so glad to read some new chapters. Iam sorry for Draco as once again he acted without thinking and it looks like he has lost Harry and the baby. But I have this hope that left alone for awhile Harry will want to go back to Draco and they will be able to sort out there feelings. And good for Draco standing up to his dad like that way to go. This sounds kind of mean but for once I just wish that Hermione would just stay out of things. I hope you had a great holiday and enjoyed the rest. I still have a week to go of mine and look forward to reading your updates everyday. Take care.

ahhhh!

...okay hon, in previous chapters, you had Hermione tell Harry that the Superios would be practically fawning over him when he was pupped...this seems to be the exact opposite of what\'s going on. I find it strange that Draco didn\'t smell that Harry was pupped, the only way I can figure it is that Draco simply didn\'t know what he was smelling. I am looking forward to Harry and Snape having a closer relationship, not one of mates of course, but merely of...oh, I guess the only way to relate it would be looking at elephants, nearly all of the herd are female and they have the oldest female lead them and act as the matriarch, pretty much keeping the dangerous males away from the herd and protecting the young. And yes, I do want to see some Snape and Harry cuddling. No matter what the species, when pregnant, there is a need for touch, whether it\'s of the same sex or otherwise.
Actually, I like the idea of Snape buying Harry expensive cloths and lining Harry\'s room when it so that it really is like a nest. But I suppose any actions like that will be after Snape is off of the potion. I can almost see Snape as becoming a surrogate father of sorts. That would be an excellent path to explore, because he already seems like he\'s \'watching over\' the boys, and coming at the last moment to protect Hermione and Harry made me see him as a guardian type. I don\'t think at all that he\'s interested in Harry, it sounds more like he\'s just tired of his instincts, of what he is, he had to deal with it since he was born, with no potion to help him until he was an adult, I\'m sure the boys couldn\'t imagine what that was like since they\'ve always had someone to look out for them.
I\'m really looking forward to you developing Snape\'s insticts clashing with his shame and conscience, maybe Harry could even help him. I just feel so bad for Snape. And I do like that you had Draco challenge his father in order to protect Harry. I want to see some serious moping on Draco\'s part, maybe even to the point of following Harry (at a distance) and sending him soft gifts, maybe detaching himself from his friends while going into a sort of depression.
I\'m also still waiting for Harry to make some purring sound unconsciously when he\'s comfortable that drives the Superios nuts. And I am fully expecting Snape to massage Harry\'s abdomen, because that is the best feeling in the world. That\'s when Harry should purr. Snape should just smile lightly at this, being too old and experienced for the sound to affect him too much. Another thing would be to make Harry whimper when he wants something Snape has, like a snack or something, so that Snape grudgingly gives it to him without conflict. Harry could also start sneaking into Snape\'s bed at night so that he can have his stomach rubbed.
And again I ask, are you basing the Indago species on ferrets?


Good times and rock on,

Dom