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by lojenn

schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, I\'m glad that Hagrid could cheer up Harry. Uhhh, and the part with Draco not wanting to destroy Harry\'s nest, was so cute!! =)

More soon? Plz?
person amethyst
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello i am a bit lost indago are canine? intresting chapter. please write more soon.how long before harry has the child? is harry going to go back to his den or the hospital?
person Rebecca
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, if todays update was ment for yesterday, then we should get 2 updates today. It\'s only fair.
person Wildfire
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
evening.... night... werewolves.. breading sub.... BAD COMBINATION!
person Your fan
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was really touching. And then sweet. I liked it. And kindof full with hints about further affairs.
person foxfire
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well its still going good, an i like it!! i guess it all deepends on were its going to lead i guess,.. But its all Good, please continue!!
person rebecca
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh i hope draco takes him back before there wearwolves get him!
person LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, I must agree with Dominic Shade.
The lady (Lydia was she?) really didnt work for that chapter.
I think you should follow DShade\'s advice and try to make Snape more in character--you know,
acting paternal but forever denying it. Do stuff like cover Harry up
with an extra blanket at night, but vehemently deny it later--that\'s
soo like Snape to secretly worry about his ward.
Bringing the lady into the story just brought in much unneeded tension and drama.
Plus, she really didnt improve the plot.
Anyways, happy updating and hope you had fun at the fair!
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap! It\'s after dark and Harry is heading to the castle alone and there\'s a pack of werewolves out there! I need chapter 48! How is Draco? What is he doing?
person skuf
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Also: Hermione is great. If it wasn\'t for her voice of sanity, I don\'t think I could have stomached it - Harry definitely has a degree of battered!wife syndrome :o/ !