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by lojenn

person inumoon3
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I\'ve read all your chapters in least than a day, and I\'m stunned! Poor Harry I hope he and Draco get back together! They belong together and I just think that Hermoine\'s jealous of Harry and Draco cause she doesn\'t have something like that! I mean I know Draco hit him but that was only the second time and he felt threatened, I mean and I loved how Draco tried to keep Harry\'s nest untouched! Draco\'s sorry I just know he is, and avoiding Harry is just his own little way of dealing with his lost!!! Well update soon, cause I can\'t wait for the next chapter, this story is getting to good for you not to update! I hope you have Harry and Draco get back together soon!!!!!
person duckeyedfool
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooo poor harry, please let him bump into draco in a nice way, and does he have to have the baby its makes everything so diffacult... it could be sent off to live in the forbidden forest untill it comes of age. =)
person Mastin
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Poor, depressed Harry. I love how you\'ve written this story. It all makes so much sense psycholgocially
person LPhoenix
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*holds chest* it hurts...... poor harry..... update again soon...
person Jolene
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! Snape is being such a prick as usual. How come Harry\'s scent doesn\'t seem to be affecting Snape and visa versa? Harry really has come full circle, back in the cupboard. Sigh. When will he get a break? Soon I hope. Well I\'ll just sit here and wait for you to get back and post. Waiting.................Waiting,taps fingers..............Waiting
person Dominic Shade
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know why you don\'t feel right about this chap....it\'s the woman. Original characters are fine an\' all...but you seriously don\'t need one here. I\'d just expect Snape to be out around the castle more, barkin\' at students and such, just tryin\' to stay away from Harry. But I really want Snape to take on a more paternal nature. And more grieving and stalking on Draco\'s part. The Hagrid bit was a very nice touch, so I think you should leave that in.


Good times and rock on,

Dom
person Ravenfrog
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like where you\'ve been going with this lately, keep up the good work.
person stephanie
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude i\'m telling you great story i love it a lot!!!!! But when are harry and draco gonna get back together and can hermione butt out already i mean my god like in almost all the stories i read about harry/draco fanfiction she always has to be into the buisness and being in control and junk!!!! Gets me mad!!! Well keep updating please!!!!
person Squall-sama
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... where do I begin? I think first off, I should say that I\'m rather damned lucky to be able to have so many chapters to read right away. I think I would have nearly killed myself if I hadn\'t. -_-0 This fic is absolutely amazing--it\'s totally deserving of it\'s many reviews and I couldn\'t think of anything less, you are an amazing and talented author. I love everything about this fic, from the anstiness to the fluffiness to the pairings (I LOVE SS/HP but I also love DM/HP--it\'s so bleedin\' hard to find an even remotely decent DracoxHarry fic out there) to, well... EVERYTHING! The idea is just amazing and the way you write is even more amazing--it really makes the reader feel like part of the story and you want to help them and be a part of whats happening. I just... I really can\'t describe how beautiful and perfect this fic is and you also have no grammer or spelling problems! That is definitely a plus. And, I\'m sure you already have a few people who are helping you our or you have ideas for what\'s coming up and how to help Harry get back with Draco, or on Snape\'s good side--or both, but I thought, since you keep bringing the werewolves up they could like.... I dunno, attack Harry or get ahold of him or something and one of Supero\'s would have to save the day! *laughs* I\'m sure you probably have something like that in mind though--or have a nother way to get them back to... er, uh... \"normal\".>.< Anyway, I cannot WAIT for the next update, but I\'ll try. *bows*
person Alexa
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re right - something doesn\'t feel right in this chapter. Somewhere in the first part, I think.
And - as you wrote yourself - once Harry is pregnant the superos must spoil him, not ignore him...
About werewolfs, I think you should pick up the pace there - we already know that thee is some connection and more information to find out. There is noo need to arouse curiosity - it\'s already there. Maybe Remus could show up soon?