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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT! EXCELLENT! WONDERFUL! FANTABULOUS!!! Chapter 47 is actually MUCH MUCH MUCH better with the addition of Logan. His addition makes his relationships with Lydia and Logan not as serious--it makes it more like sexual need. Thank you for changing that! And thank god Snape will give Harry more touch. ( I still think he should rub Harry\'s belly!) Snape seemed much better in chapter 48. Thanks for making him like that.
One question: what did Snape mean when he said \"make yourself needed\"? I understand the concept, but how? Is there a double meaning to his words? Does Harry have to read between the lines? hmm...I\'m more hooked than before, which seems impossible but its true!
I love the new Harry by the way! Maybe now he\'ll catch Draco\'s eye!! And keep up the excellent work! Cant WAIT for the next update!!!!!!!!
One question: what did Snape mean when he said \"make yourself needed\"? I understand the concept, but how? Is there a double meaning to his words? Does Harry have to read between the lines? hmm...I\'m more hooked than before, which seems impossible but its true!
I love the new Harry by the way! Maybe now he\'ll catch Draco\'s eye!! And keep up the excellent work! Cant WAIT for the next update!!!!!!!!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ITs a good thing Harry got all that off his chest.
Confession is good for the soul!
Now maybe Snape can relay Harry\'s message of need
and missing Draco to Draco himself,
although that seems really like an OOC Snape.
BUt still its nice to imagine...and thank you for
making Snape\'s relationships to Lydia and Logan so meaningless.
It makes me feel better that he is really \"doing\" them to
get rid of some of the sexual frustration caused by
Harry himself. So they are not really needed by him...
they are his \"harem\". I know, I\'m weird! I just want
Snape\'s heart to belong to Harry (even if he wont
admit it...I think that he definitely has feelings for Harry...
that is why he held him like that...but knowing Snape, he\'ll never act on it
because Harry is Draco\'s right?)
Anyway, I digress. Excellent chappie and please update soon babe!!
LUVS!
Confession is good for the soul!
Now maybe Snape can relay Harry\'s message of need
and missing Draco to Draco himself,
although that seems really like an OOC Snape.
BUt still its nice to imagine...and thank you for
making Snape\'s relationships to Lydia and Logan so meaningless.
It makes me feel better that he is really \"doing\" them to
get rid of some of the sexual frustration caused by
Harry himself. So they are not really needed by him...
they are his \"harem\". I know, I\'m weird! I just want
Snape\'s heart to belong to Harry (even if he wont
admit it...I think that he definitely has feelings for Harry...
that is why he held him like that...but knowing Snape, he\'ll never act on it
because Harry is Draco\'s right?)
Anyway, I digress. Excellent chappie and please update soon babe!!
LUVS!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read your story all under an hour and i must say ITS SUPERB!!!
You were saying that you thought there was something wrong with your
last chappie rite? well, I believe its the woman taht\'s making you feel
this way. I believe taht in order to make the chappie better, you should
get rid of her. She contributes nil to the story and I just plain dont like
her. I\'ve read the reviews to this chappie and I agree with Dominic Shade
and look-at-my-ding-a-ling-ling. Their suggestions are excellent! I think
you should heed them. I really hope your fair was good and please update
soon. I love this story so much!! YOu are garnering more and more reviews everyday!!
Keep it up!
You were saying that you thought there was something wrong with your
last chappie rite? well, I believe its the woman taht\'s making you feel
this way. I believe taht in order to make the chappie better, you should
get rid of her. She contributes nil to the story and I just plain dont like
her. I\'ve read the reviews to this chappie and I agree with Dominic Shade
and look-at-my-ding-a-ling-ling. Their suggestions are excellent! I think
you should heed them. I really hope your fair was good and please update
soon. I love this story so much!! YOu are garnering more and more reviews everyday!!
Keep it up!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw! I love Hagrid so much. It\'s nice how he can chear up Harry. As for the rest, I feel awful about the situation everyone (except Snape, who ticked me off in this chapter, though he -was- perfect!) is in. Especially poor Harry, ignored and all. If he gets sick it should give a good kick to both Snape and Draco. Maybe Draco will notice and decide to interfere?
A gal can hope! Anyway, love it! And I hope you had a good time at the fair!
A gal can hope! Anyway, love it! And I hope you had a good time at the fair!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG HERMIONE SHUT UP!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE! i want harry and draco back together. Why is hermione being such a bitch? oops did i say that outloud? *giggle and grin*
*gives you a cookie* job well done.
Lena/Saucy
*gives you a cookie* job well done.
Lena/Saucy
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy - where\'s our update!
Had a terrible day at work but figured it\'d be worth it cause I\'d get to come home and read a new chapter -
and, And, AND, ANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNND THERE\'S NO UPDATED CHAPTER!
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.
Had a terrible day at work but figured it\'d be worth it cause I\'d get to come home and read a new chapter -
and, And, AND, ANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNND THERE\'S NO UPDATED CHAPTER!
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter! I like that hagrid is wise and gave Harry a hope. Draco has chnaged, has not he? He misses Harry as well.
Hermione is too clinical but I see where her attitude towards Draco\'s issue comes from.
Snape is as an old git as ever. But I see where this come from as well.
Poor depressed Harry. He needs to be back with Draco. Are they going to forgive each other soon?
Hermione is too clinical but I see where her attitude towards Draco\'s issue comes from.
Snape is as an old git as ever. But I see where this come from as well.
Poor depressed Harry. He needs to be back with Draco. Are they going to forgive each other soon?
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH! OMG! i just read the entire story in like 3 hours (not consecutivly. My dad kicked me off a couple times... who needs food when i have good fiction?). SO GOOD and you\'re SO EVIL! leaving off like that...
could draco actually care for harry?
will snape continue to be a snarky bastard (ok so he is a snarky bastard ALL the time but you know what i mean!)?
Is harry having a boy or a girl?
WHEN IS REMY COMING BACK!?!
Who is the father?
so many questions.
Also i\'d like to thank you for this story. for three breif shinning hours i forgot about the crap in my life, bravo!
I must admit the whole lizard thing had me worried...then you said dogs so i was like \"ok much better\"
If you can\'t tell it\'s 2:00 AM i have had 0 sleep so i\'m rambling
LOVE IT! Write more!
Lena/Saucy
could draco actually care for harry?
will snape continue to be a snarky bastard (ok so he is a snarky bastard ALL the time but you know what i mean!)?
Is harry having a boy or a girl?
WHEN IS REMY COMING BACK!?!
Who is the father?
so many questions.
Also i\'d like to thank you for this story. for three breif shinning hours i forgot about the crap in my life, bravo!
I must admit the whole lizard thing had me worried...then you said dogs so i was like \"ok much better\"
If you can\'t tell it\'s 2:00 AM i have had 0 sleep so i\'m rambling
LOVE IT! Write more!
Lena/Saucy
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK GAWD!!!! You UPDATED!!!! YAY!!!!!!! That was way late. But so good!!!!!!! Can\'t wait for the next chappie.
Please say that Draco isn\'t going to NOT do something to make things right between
he and Harry?!?! Ugh. I can\'t stand waiting. Make things right.
Cheers!
Please say that Draco isn\'t going to NOT do something to make things right between
he and Harry?!?! Ugh. I can\'t stand waiting. Make things right.
Cheers!